I love the way you write, I'm hooked on your story. Poor Sirius, he seems very enamoured by our dear Mr. Lupin XD

I loved this story so much though I am sad its one sided :( still great read.

So I don't particularly care for slash, nor do I generally like to read this era, but I liked this story. The emotions were real and beautifully described, and the conclusion of this story was just too sweet for words. I loved how they noticed the other's little idiosyncrasies and habits. Just so sweet! I really liked this.

This was really sweet but not overly so as a lot of Wolfstar seems to be. Puppy love is a good way to put it. I think you managed to describe all of Remus' best qualities here. "flaunting his talents with a knife like no man had a right to" was such an awesome line. I don't know why. Maybe because I always consider Sirius to be the one to do a lot of things that way and it's funny that he sees that in somebody else. I also really liked the emphasis on his scent and how it reminds Remus of home. I like when writers use the sense of smell in their writing because it's so connected with memories and associations (sorry, I'm a psych student. I read into that stuff. nerd.) I also really loved the counting his scars bit because they fascinate me. And just the number forty-four by itself emphasizes that he means it. Nice job with this one!

Very good. Keep writing

Ah, puppy love. Usually it's one-sided from Remus' side, so stories where Sirius is the one side are rare. That's why this one is so good.

It is perfect. Loved it. :')

Great! The one-sided part of it makes me sad, but the glorifying of Remus makes me happy! The way you describe things sometimes gives me chills. I could just chuck a cat out of a helicopter.

This is very cute, a little plotless, but your descriptions of Remus from Sirius's point of view are well thought out and well written. For some reason, I like the line about him being "an all fruits and no vegetables kind of guy," either because I'm that way, or because it's the kind of thing that someone stuck in puppy love would notice. I didn't notice any errors and it was well done. :)