I like dominant, somehow oppressing man especially if they grow through the novel. But hitting pregnant women is not my thing sorry. Also i see Sarah here soo soo weak willed who just accepts anything as it comes...not even trying to defy or at least try to protect her baby. As I see Jareth is not developing at all he is just a weird jack/hyde thing. Still cudos for you for still writing and finishing and I am certain many other readers do like it.

To be honest, the message your story sends is quite awful. Your writing style and what not is fine. But, you have basically said. Abusive stalker loves girl, gets girl, abuses girl, but wait, he gets better and for some unknown reason managed not to kill the baby she was carrying while still abusing said girl in the beginning. Happily Ever After. -_-;

I liked it the play boy hard ass becomes a man in the end ️

I really enjoyed your story have you ever thought about getting it published? I would totally read it again

:3 loved it! so cute! Jareth was horrid in the beginning! But i'm glad they had a happy ending.

Yes! Happy endings rule!

{smiles} Nice ending. Nice story.

What the hell was that!? I am shocked

i loved it :)

Love the twins fun twist

ugly story

I must admit I was a little wary of the story but it kept reading :)

Awesome! But you didn't include the wedding vows or anything!:-)

That was great, i love the ending! It's exactly the kind of ending I think is perfect for Jareth and Sarah. So glad i finally found a long one that is finished and i really enjoyed it. thank you!

this was a great ending, i just think you should add an epilogue to it just so we can see how they are so many years down the road, that's it.