| Reviews for A Trip to Greece |
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   jayfeather12345 chapter 7 . 6/27/2013 Hey Zappy, I actually think your story was quite good. You did have a couple of grammar mistakes which I'll PM you about but apart from that I liked the story line (tell your friends from me it was really good) and the humor was great. Seriously, I cannot write humor for the life of me but I think your humor was great and really added to the story. Great work :) Are you going to write another PJ fic? |
| Guest chapter 5 . 10/8/2012 percy caan sense longitude and latitude when hes at sea and he could have made an air bubble for leo and its a chihaua not a poodle |
| Pie 314 chapter 1 . 9/8/2012 what dose not a slash mean |
| Pie 314 chapter 6 . 8/28/2012 I'll try the whole JLS, Jason Mraz thing next time I write a story |
| Pie 314 chapter 7 . 8/28/2012 are you writing another story soon |
| Padfootblack chapter 7 . 8/26/2012 Really good. The epilogue sounded a bit like me talking to my best friend. Im always off topic! |
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/20/2012 I LOVE THIS STORY! |
| Happy Snow chapter 5 . 8/5/2012 The last part was just wrong... I just hope Percy is sensible enough not to be angry at Leo... I believe that they are quite similar and will become close friends when they met! :D Good story :P |
| IloveheartlandX chapter 5 . 8/5/2012 Best chapter yet! The humor of this chapter was great! |
| 12345678910111213 chapter 5 . 8/4/2012 How bout he sets fire to the rain! Great chappie. Annie bell snogging Lelo, priceless! -Yours in Awsomeness, The would-be daughter of Mr.D |
| bee chapter 1 . 7/29/2012 Great except for one thing, in the books annabeth is said to be very beautiful so her beauty should be pretty close to piper's. |
| valdezsflame chapter 4 . 7/27/2012 Lovve it update soooon :) |
| icewindsleetandsnow chapter 2 . 7/27/2012 Try the fifth chapter without humor and see how it goes. Maybe you have some personal humor that you add without knowing it? Anyway, great story, love to read the next chapters! |
| Anastasia Laurels 2.0 chapter 4 . 7/26/2012 No one really seemed out of character to me in this chapter. :) Course, that also means that the three characters who were in it weren't. One of them being a monster, one of them being dead... But still! And honestly, I don't really have any sob stories for Leo written up at the moment. But promise that I will try to write one to the best of my ability and pm it to you! :D Yours in demigodishness and all that. Peace out. Anastasia Laurels 2.0 |
| IloveheartlandX chapter 4 . 7/26/2012 Nice chapter! Don't give up on your story H, you're doing fine, this chapter was really good. J |
