Two thumbs up! Excellent job. Great ending!

I really like your take on the post-finale situation. I only have one criticism that I don’t think that Sarah would publicly speak of their passion as she does on a couple of occasions. The ‘spy’ part of her would’ve kept her ‘private life‘ just that. Other than that I thought you did a fantastic job. Thank you for putting this out there.

I know this story had been complete for a few years, but I noted your mention of unkind reviews, and wanted to do my part to balance the scales. So this is for not only this story, but Long Brick Road and its sequel as well.

Thank you for your contributions. Your characters are not always how I imagined them, but there were many flavors at the Orange Orange, because people have different tastes. So even if pineapple (yes, pun from the show) isn't my favorite flavor, it doesn't mean it's bad. And I did especially appreciate the solid grammar and well written plot.

For my part, posting harshly critical reviews on here would be like writing a bad review for a soup kitchen. You didn't pay for the food, so how are you going to tell those who made it that the flavor was bad or the service wasn't up to snuff? So I'm sorry if others have lambasted you for expressing your own interpretation of the characters. I might have another interpretation of them I identify with more, but that's just my flavor.

I really enjoyed this imagining of their HEA. Thanks for sharing with us.

This was just a really enjoyable story. Your take on Sarah falling in love again and Chuck and her finally talking and sharing more was great. Nice to see all the members of Team Bartowski come together to defeat Gold and his men. Thanks so much for sharing this.

man i gotta hand it to you what a story.i am a tough cookie myself like casey but this story made me cry.i am so happy to just imagine that this could be the not what the writers wanted but what we as chuck fans wanted deep down in our rated 3000 stars if could. hats off to the writer.

I really enjoyed this story. It helped me come to terms with the ending of Goodbye. Thank you for taking the time to write it

On this occasion, I decided to leave a review once I finished instead of after each chapter, as this is only necessary when that current chapter has been uploaded.

This was an exceptionally good story, personally not quite as good as Brick Road but never the less great reading.

sometimes I thought the story dragged a bit with regards to the worthiness and insecurities but I guess the story had to be told and in fairness Chuck always felt that in canon, vs Phase Three.

I was pleased that a certain very special occasion was included in the last chapter, good thinking writers.

Everyone has an opinion and this no criticism but I personally would have named the daughter with the one that was mentioned in a very important scene in season 1 at the of an episode (You know the one I am talking about, where Yvonne really shines)

I am in total agreement with Bill regarding Canon and not really finishing the story off at the end of the series but one real gripe and I have a few, which I have often voiced is why the hell did they include the pregnancy and talk about having children only to completely disregard it with the memory swipe, cruel, like the dreaded season 3, so much mentioned and just swept under the carpet when these important events could have been featured in later episodes, such wasted opportunity.

I accidentally posted an unfinished review before I was trying to say she should’be been given back her wedding memories. Still excellent story.

It’s been awhile since I’ve read this story I had forgotten about the epilogue saying she’d gotten almost all of her memories back but I would’ve given her most the m

I know you’ve finished this story 5 yrs ago & I enjoyed this one immensely I rather have her memories come back to her cause I believe without them she’d be more distrusting of him. She fought her feelings for 2.5 yrs before she gave into them & I always liked how most of your stories never had her & Shaw together to me that storyline killed the momentum of the show & it never recovered to what it was before. I watched it all the way to the end & the way they ended it broke my heart.

Those spies were poorly trained.. If they had took the time to read through the mission's reports, they should know that Chuck is not someone going to hide under her bed :)

i loved this story and it certainly a better ending that we got on the show. While I too believe they lived happily ever after it is always good to see it written out as a fan... great job team

I missed the show in the past years and just watched it in 2016. The best show/characters/Actors ever! I felt just a little disappointed about the ending, so I need to thank you to have given me a bit of relief :)
This story is absolutely well written, the right mix of drama, action, romance. One of the top favorites for me.
Just a little note, that is not taking down anything about the whole story: Emma and Molly had already knew Casey.. So they don't need to be introduced to him when he escorts Chuck in their cell

I've read many, many after series stories. I think this has become one of my top 5 favorites. Well done!