you said valars but the correct term would be valar, a singular valar is a vala

I think his character is just fine, also you sed of cause instead of, of course just trying to help!
p.s. i love your storys!

HOW AMAZING THIS STORY WAS: SUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUPER AMAZING!

OH YES! FINALLY

I ove this story and your engelish is so perfect. I LOVE IT

"Valar" is the plural of "Vala", so the "s" you put at the end is obsolete

I really like your story idea but it would be very beneficial for your story if you could aquire a beta reader because it is really hard to concentrate on the plot with so many spelling and grammar mistakes. I am not a native English speaker mind you, but even I can't really enjoy your fanfiction like this.

I wish you to write some Legolas/Elrohir. They are so cute together. And gotta love overprotective Thranduil

Cute story, I would have liked to see how it ended between Legolas and Elrohir :D

This was beautiful. Your story was absolutely lovely, and I enjoyed every second. Thank you.

Awww, such a sweet ending to this long, and sweet story. And it links back to the story "The Dance". I had a fun time following this story, beginning to end.

XO
I'm dead inside

Such a very good story, dont you think that you need to continue to write it to the end. I am eager to know the ending. Pleaaaase...

Happy New Year!

Lady Vilwarin

I'm starting to like Thranduil and the fact that Elladan always ends up yelling at his twin and Legolas to shut up. They are already like a married couple.
"you can talk to this buffoon too" lol

"You can talk to this buffoon too." That is hilarious (:

Thank you! Thank you, thank you, thank you! I loved it! It was beautiful. Fael teitha.