Nice a new chapter, so Sgt Jame Byrd and Phil are still training as is everyone else.

Nice to see Bianca helping her ex and he's boyfriend to train.

So flame is going to see Spyro again I really hope they can save him in the end.
all and all not bad I hope to see more.

Nice new Chapter, The only thing I would like to say is why dose Volteer see himself as not smart when he was shown to be highly intelligent I mean I get why he doesn't see himself as a leader but I don't think he would see himself as not smart.

The father/son moment with Volteer and Flame was nice I hope Volteer trains Flame well so he can save Spyro.

At least now I know how Sgt Jame Byrd Broke up with Isabelle.

All and All good Chapter and I hope to see more.

Not bad but didn't Sgt Jame Byrd have a fairy girlfriend named Isabelle? I would like to know if their relationship didn't work out.

So where in the middle of the Fanfic? wow I hope to see more.

Update

Not bad, so everyone is getting ready to stop the villains and save Spyro.

I hope to see more.

The plot is quite ,I think the organization could be better as I sometimes find it quite difficult to read what is going on.
Keep on to see more about your works

First off, people are all like SxC because that what happens in the lengend of spyro at the and Second off, just because you don't like cynder or pairings with her doesn't mean you have to tell others that it just makes it seem like you don't have respect for others or things even if there not real things or people it doesn't mean that you should tell others you hate them and that they should die in a hole it's just plain rude. And I was really hoping to read this but now I don't want to.

Not bad, So the Mammoth isn't evil? That's interesting, I wonder how his going to help. At least Spyro and Flame got to see each other again, I liked that. Now Elders Magnus and Astor are in this? Nice I wonder if the other elders will show up. I'm happy that my support helps, both this fanfic and the Skylander one never failed to to make me happy.

Not bad, there wasn't much to say about this chapter other then it was good.
I hope to see more

love it.
please write more.
wow.

(RANT) The only thing i like from this story is the Sparx/Zoe pairing, the rest... I hate it.

Nice, another page.

It's nice to see that even at his weakest Spyro still is strong enough to defend himself to a degree, that father/son moment between Flame and Volteer was good and it's nice to see Eora dose care for flame's happiness.

That moment between Gnasty and he's pat was sweet in a why and I'm surprised that Malefor is less evil then Cynder, but then again he did believe he was doing the right thing.

I hpe to see more of this.

My god these are fucking awful. Please learn to fucking write, holy shit.

Not bad, and I liked how you described their history. I hope to see more.

Dude you're honestly fucking terrible at this. Write stories in your own language so people can filter them out.