come on man please finish it .. it's such a good story .. an pro writerpls do it !

It sucks that this story seems to have been abandoned cause it's really good. If I remember right, this is one of the first fan-fictions I ever read and it still holds up, and I'd love to see it continue someday.

Damn, this saddends me, I find this amazing fanfiction and it never finished. Out of all fanfics, yours sounded most in character, there were things that were definitely out of character, but usually only slightly. The one major moment I can remember that seemed most out of character was ChiChi, I didn't see Chichi, I saw a woman who's alot less stressed out, and actually "wanting" Videl to be married to Gohan.

In the original events that was only after she found out Videl was technically "rich" in a sense(and eventually coming to like Videl herself, and see Videl as a daughter during Super, even though it wasn't really shown.)

The realistic pace was awesome to see, It was definitely faster than Goku, cause I remember him being ALOT stronger by the time he climbed Korin's Tower. In this I see a Videl who's probably almost as strong as a Kid Goku after some training from Master Roshi.

She isn't progressing too slow or too fast. At the end of her first year of training, I see her almost as strong as Demon King Piccolo(Not Junior just to be clear, so that would leave around 180). Which would actually make sense.

I also see her at the end of the 2nd year, at 400. Now I'm not sure if you'll do that, but the reason I expect that is cause, if you remember at this point of time, there's many different methods, Videl could actually get stronger.
We've already seen you utilize the gravity chamber, and the training weights. So hopefully after two years, it'll begin to progress faster, but to an extent.

It's too bad you never continued it. In my personal opinion, I believe Gohan should've been slightly more oblivious, and taken longer to some of that.

Five years. This fic is inventive and well-written and really deserves to be finished.

Please continue! This fanfic is so good. But I understand if you have any problems, I just want to let you know that you did an amazing job.

Great concept... 'sigh' but every great story comes to that point where videl finds gohan... gohan is as usual universal nerd despite suffering several traumatic fights and etc... videl glares at him and he wets himself... his secrets are revealed and after that videl is angry at him for not trusting her with secrets... and gohan begs to her for forgiving and the story ends with their relationship... but u took it a point far man.. videl slapping him at every chance and he feels his fault for even that... ugh seriously fed up with these stories
I understand that anime made it like that but couldnt here the writers change it... like everbody knows that why Gohan keeps secrets and videl keeps hounding him so how can he trust her with it and i personally know that with the no. Of fights he had faced he wouldnt be a happy go lucky or atleast a nerd shy guy.. but i guess it couldnt be helped

Updates :/

Yeah thats absolute bullshit about Vegeta. Also, since when was 17 evil?

damn, I really loved this story. it's a shame you never finished it! I really enjoyed the concept.

I’m really disappointed that this will never be finished from the look of things. It was a good story and a great concept.

kidney punch! kidney punch! kidney punch!
"stop hitting yourself Vegeta"

This a really interesting twist to the DBZ universe, I thoroughly enjoyed it. I know you probably aren't going to finish this, but know that your work is appreciated by someone.

i really hope that this story will get updated it's really nice

Plots are overrated. Slice of life fun is golden!

Please let the masquerade end, Z-Fighters. You guys aren't even taking on real students. Let someone have some damn fun in the world