*Thumb up* This was a really enjoyable piece! Good work!

Since you reviewed my story it's my turn! I've never really thought of this couple, really. But, I enjoyed this story. I like how you descibed how ALfons thought about Ed, and his "make believe" (which it TOTALLY isn't) world. I really like the ending, how he said "I'll accept that." "But I still want to keep telling you my story." I could imagine the softness of his tone, and his expressions. GREAT JOB!

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O.o Your innocence has been ruined! Not quite ruined, exactly, but HOW DO YOU KNOW ENOUGH ABOUT THIS TYPE OF THING TO WRITE ABOUT IT? Keep in mind that it takes a lot for me to turn the Caps Lock on. Well written, and only light slash. I-I just don't approve of slash. You're a wonderful writer, but slash makes me as a reader feel uncomfortable.