Reviews for Demons Inside
BlueStar19 chapter 12 . 1/14/2017
Please continue. I want to know what happens next. I have an idea that goes like this. You can chose to use it or not. If you do you can alternate it if you want.

Mori had just finished the ritual with the help of Kyo. Kira was no more. She was locked up safely inside of her previous prison. Weak from the ritual, she collapsed to the ground, going into a sleep. Piccolo felt happy. The danger had passed and he can take care of his basket baby. Kyo breathed heavily and stared at his sleeping daughter. The other fighters stood not that far away, shaken from the sight.

"She'll never escape again," Kyo said. "Piccolo, can I talk to you alone?"

Piccolo looked at the man before nodding slowly. They walked into the forest and away from the others. Kyo turned around and faced the Namekian warrior. He held out his hand towards him. Piccolo looked at it, but didn't take it. Kyo shrugged and let his hand fall to his side.

"What do you want to talk about?" asked Piccolo.

"I wanted to thank you for taking care of my daughter when I couldn't," Kyo said. "She's turned out to be a strong woman."

"It wasn't difficult," said Piccolo.

"I know. That's why I'm taking her back," Kyo said.

Before Piccolo could answer, he felt pain in his left side. He looked down to see the knife that Kira had in Kyo's hand. He had stabbed the green warrior, the knife tilted up to puncture the lung. Piccolo gasped in shock and pain, his blood already staining his clothing. Kyo let go of the knife and let the fighter fall to the ground, struggling to breathe.

"Sorry it had to be this way, but I want my daughter back," Kyo said.

Piccolo tried to get up, but he couldn't. He knew that his lung was punctured and that he was bleeding out. It wouldn't be long before he died. Kyo left the forest and picked up Mori. He held her close and looked towards the others.

"Piccolo said to just head to the Lookout to heal and recover. He'll join us shortly," Kyo lied.

They all took off towards the Lookout. They knew that it would be a while for Piccolo to join them. Gohan stayed behind, sensing that something wasn't right. He would wait for Piccolo. Gohan headed towards the forest to go find his teacher.

Something like that. So like I said you can use it and change it if you want.
Guest chapter 7 . 12/19/2016
Ill pm you if I have any.
Zombiegirl777 chapter 12 . 3/30/2015
Nuuuuuuuuuuuuuu! :o I am so sad this is the final chapter you have posted, since I just spent the last couple hours reading Basket Baby and now this... I need to read more Goten x Mori x Trunks ASAP! I hope you plan to continue this story in the future but since I can see that it was last updated over a year ago, I don't have too much hope ;_; Either way, it's been an amazing ride and aside from a few spelling/grammar mistakes... This is truly one of the top DBZ fics I've had the pleasure of reading :]
Zombiegirl777 chapter 11 . 3/30/2015
Vegeta's line made it so perfect... "You ain't done shit." I wish everyone else would be like, "Oooooooo dayum sonnnnn!"

"Maury says you are NOT the father! Ooooooooooooo!"

I drank too much coffee today, clearly ._.
Zombiegirl777 chapter 5 . 3/30/2015
King Cold and Kira... I ship it XD
Jleath1234 chapter 1 . 4/1/2014
You should do a chapter where Piccolo gets sick but hes really going to have a egg of his own...
nerdymango chapter 12 . 1/1/2014
aww, that was sweet. :3 cute chapter, update soon! 3
nerdymango chapter 11 . 12/29/2013
update soon please! :) Great chapter. love it.
Anginator chapter 10 . 12/28/2013
I was kinda hopeing for that twist in the relationship part of the story, i am really enjoying with will you be updateing it anymore i really wanna finish the story it is going to be SOOO awesome i just know it, i wish i could write like this. let me know if you are planning on updateing this story anymore my email is . K? thanks!
b7nnyst7ffs chapter 10 . 9/11/2013
NUUUUUUU I voted Trunks! DX too short!
Gemini-0608 chapter 10 . 8/17/2013
Omg. Trunks and gotten are thinking, my chance!
b7nnyst7ffs chapter 9 . 5/16/2013
PERFECT! I really love that you still managed to make Piccolo act like himself in that emotional moment! Hisui is such a softy XD! Update soon!
Gemini-0608 chapter 9 . 5/16/2013
Next chapter? I cant wait!
kkman57 chapter 8 . 3/31/2013
Hmm, I like this chapter. It was short, but it was still well explained. I can't wait to see the next chapter.
b7nnyst7ffs chapter 8 . 3/28/2013
Yay! Her mom is a jerk! Why am i happy about that?!
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