too sad, i like the writing but the story itself is too sad, the doctor, sarah jane and all Luke's friends dying? PS. what happened to sky? she didnt seem to be in it very much.

Wow, that was astonishing. So much feeling poured into those words...fantastic. The cycle of it all, too: at the end, it's insinuated that Luke becomes the Doctor. He's on Gallifrey, he has two hearts, the TARDIS is back in a museum, waiting to be stolen...but all of it...just wow. Fantastic.

This was honestly beautiful. I knew it was going to be dark even before I saw the warning, but I never expected what would happen when Luke came back. This story was brilliant, and I'm really glad I found it! Keep up the fantastic work!

Yesterday I watched the. " Doctor Who " movie so finally I get where that quote comes from . Anyway loved this it's very dark , poor Luke ,well now that the Doctor is dead looks like Luke will be traveling in the TARDIS.

This is astonishing in every way, but I find it just too horrible to be beautiful. This isn't me reeling from having ignored your warning. I was prepared, at least to the extent that I expected a sad ending. I just cannot love it. I'm sorry and thank you at the same time. I seem to have released a great amount of emotional energy reading this. I should be relaxed for the next two weeks.

Very good story, you write very well in my opinion. I like your gingerbread man story too, :-)

...Head canon is now accepted...
Damn...That was...wow...