Magnificent chapter can't wait for more please update soon.

Uh

i gotta tell you this is by far the best marine luffy fic i have read, other just slap luffy with a high rank and have him go about it like he did in the manga. you made me belive that luffy could be marine.

There's a stupid smile on my face
I love this fic so much
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NOOOOOOOO! YOU MUST CONTINUE! I WILL DIE OF YOU DONT! I really will die!

Magnificent chapter can't wait for more please update soon.

Waaaaaaait. Please don't delete? TT-TT i mean if you delete them and never get around to rewriting them then i'll never see them again D: can't they both exist in the same space? The current fics ad future rewritten fics I mean :((((((

Gonna LOVE this one:)

I can't wait to see Smoker in Loguetown, now that they're on the same side of things. ;D

I really like your story and think you should continue. I like how even though Luffy is a marine he still follows what he believes in. I really think you should continue.

Funny twist on the story. I like it and I hope we will get more chapters soon, because I like how you have switched the story up here. Looking forward to seeing more of this Luffy and getting more of his background story!

Well that was nice, till I realized it's running on 2 years without an update. Never gonna see Nezumi get his just desserts eh?

I like this Marine Luffy, I've read one before where he basically forced Zoro to join him on false (knowingly) charges and that kinda pissed me off. Sure I want Zoro to join Luffy but not in that way, not when Luffy is playing a "Good marine"

awesome I hope to see more soon

i want to see luffy meet smoker