Seriously i thought naruto is powerful bt i jst read chapter 3 and naruto is such a moron and powerless

I like but it wouldn't take 4 years to complete an Akatasuki member but nice so far

is he 6 or 8? Because 1st it was 6 and later 8 which 1 is correct age?

WTF Naruto would never rape or beat hinata, its shown throughout naruto and naruto shippuden how much he cares about his friends, I liked it up until i read that. Now I dont think I can carry on.

That means Yukito did not have ear Human right ?

cool

Cool : )

Don't end it it's great !:,,(

That is not my real name it is my disgiuse and I thought it was a great chapter to show houw they care.

None of this would have happened if Hinata behaved like a real mother and allowed that surgery to make her son look normal. Mothers accept their kids as they are but also do their best to make sure that their children will find happiness, she decided to deny her son the chance of a normal appearance and having to face against prejudice.

I'm done with this.

nice story. Lots of spelling and grammer errors. I've seen worse. I intend to read sequal sometime. Hope it is better than this one. It wasn't bad but could have benn better with a bit of tweaking. Keep up the good work.

In ch 9 sneaking out you killed kikashi by way of sasake... in 15 he shows back up years later all of a sudden...

Only read to ch 3 so far but your ooc comedy rutine is funny as heck. Dunno bout story yet. Let you know later :)

Considering how well I know you now, I laughed harder than I should have when I read that authors note

I also own the rights to this, Hiroko gave me permsion