| Reviews for A Breathe of Fresh Air |
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sasunaru13 chapter 1 . 9/5/2015 ohmg this fic is like oasis in the middle of the desert which is rusame fandom in the beginning! i agree so much, there were just too many of noncon rusame where alfred is abused and this kind of fic is just what rusame fans like me needs! and totally fluffy and cute my heart is meltinggg! bless you so much for qriting and sharing this! |
anonymous chapter 1 . 8/9/2013 I CAN IMAGINE arthur seeing ivan and alfred and then his heart breaking XD |
Maiev-S chapter 1 . 2/6/2013 Awwwwww what a wonderful fluffy story we have here! - hugs the fanfic until making it pant for air- I freagging love it so much - Well, There was a slip at the beggining where I read "America" and not "Alfred", as this is an AU but it was ok as we understood XD Another thing is that I've read more than one of your fanfics and in the adv you seem to put "smut" where it should be "lemon". Smut is a fanfic gender where there is no plot or the plot is lame, but the story is full of sex stuff(lemon) , which is not your case because u have a wonderful plot that includes lemon, I do not know if I explained myself very well... ...Oh Arthur, I wonder how it went for him after this XD Keep doing that awesome rol of yours, I know its not the same when rp than converting it to a fanfic so I kinda look you up, because you both really are awesome! |
America96 chapter 1 . 1/8/2013 awww they are so cute together...especially after a nice steam bout of sex lol |
L0rdEnglish chapter 1 . 1/3/2013 that was amaaaaazingg! Your such a GREAT author! EEEEEEEEEE its just soooo cute! |
Miss Yasu chapter 1 . 11/25/2012 Why did you stop here? Ugh, you're just so good at writing cliff hangers, aren't you? |
ljvoufoutvojubojvtu chapter 1 . 10/1/2012 *Drool* Wow! That was hawt! Poor Iggy. He missed out! ;P I love your writing style! Very in depth yet funny at the same time. I've read hundreds of America smut fics, and not one of them have incorporated Tony. And what a great addition he was! One thing I feel I should mention, however, is that you seem to substitute 'when' for 'whenever' quite a lot. Ex: "So /whenever/ Ivan had heard angry stomping outside his dorm, he'd cracked his door open..." should be "So /when/ Ivan had heard angry stomping outside his dorm, he'd cracked his door open..." Anyway, LOVED the fic! |
Wayzati chapter 1 . 9/14/2012 dude, best RP fic ive ever read in mylife ;u; iloveditsomuch3 |
91RedRoses chapter 1 . 9/6/2012 ((in a coma)) so... good... can't... handle the... awesomeness... so sweet and... the smut... happy place. |
Nana chapter 1 . 7/16/2012 "I'm glad you weren't the pizza man." LOL Oh gosh, I loved this xD Not only was it written well, but I felt like the pace was good too :) Of course, I almost found it hard to believe that Alfred would have sex with Ivan (someone he just got to know), especially after having his heartbroken and was still holding feelings for Arthur, but with Al's emotional state and Ivan's kind and supportive gestures (plus the touching and slight flirting) made it all possible I also liked the fact that Alfred didn't 'shoo' Ivan away, but instead wanted to give Ivan a chance to possibly fall in love again :) It made it seem more realistic than just getting over Arthur right then and there, and declaring his love for Ivan. Well done guys, well done! :D |
Guest chapter 1 . 7/16/2012 Poor Alfred :( ive been exactly where he was. i just wish i had a hot russian to come over to my house and confert me ;3 |
KitsuneMagic48 chapter 1 . 7/11/2012 Awww that was really cute! Not enough cute with this pairing! |
Usagi323 chapter 1 . 7/11/2012 (Hey guess who this is! :D Not that my username isn't exactly the same as the one I have on DA. ) This was a pleasant surprise I found when searching threw then new RusAme fics on here. XD Thank you, I think you make an excellent Ivan yourself. (But had I known you'd post this on FF I would have proof read my replies, so many typos gah! XD) |
Bai-Marionette chapter 1 . 7/10/2012 Sequel, sequel, sequel, SEQUEL MOTHER FRENCHERS! 8D I loved this sooooo much, even more since I've got a college fict of my own, but this was PRUSSIAN-FUCKING-AWESOME. I have the right to say that, I am German (born in Berlin). And this Prussian-awesome German demands a sequel! ASAP! I love you and I give you cookies if you do |
Anastazia Braginski chapter 1 . 7/10/2012 nice ;) |