nononono harry don't be unfaithful to loki
don't you do it!
:C

T/h/s/thor

WHAT?! That's the end?! DUDE! That's so uncool, you're killing us readers with the cliffhanger here! Dx It WAS an interesting story, though. I'm not quite a fan of how it had a more sad atmosphere than any, all throughout the story. But still, well written.

I don't fully understand what happened... uh explain?

the second part?

The feelings that this gave me..I can't describe them...I can't- *shakes my head*

I feel compellingly empty. You have my gratitude.

tony/Harry/Steve with Harry as Dominant (Top)

I say all three tiny harry steve but how did harry lose a child i think it would be cool if it was odin that made ot look like the baby dief

I hope you continue, I really want to know what happens next. Has Harry done something to himself? Has Odin and Friga taken Harry away because he was to full of grief? WHAAAAAAT?

uhm.. definitely shows that you are a very talented writer, but I really didn't like the story. Either I didn't get it, or there really was no real "point" to the story. Harry fell in love. Loki fell in love. Thor fell in love. Harry and Loki got together. Harry had a miscarriage. Loki was a bastard in his grief. Loki left for Earth. Harry and Thor got together. Thor learned that Loki was alive and went to get him. Loki was still a bastard. Open End.
It's not a sad story. It's not a happy story. It's not really romance. I couldn't identify with or root for any characters.

You have talent, but I didn't like this.

I know its kinda the point, but I REALLY WANT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT

Amazing! Love it a lot! Please continue soon!

Soooo good! Can't harry end up with Thor? And why was earth there again? When you said the planet needed to die does that mean a planet almost exactly the same sprouted up and evolved? Or was it the same planet but in a parallel universe that was also accessible to Asgard?

oh my!

what is to come?!
i loved this one.

thank you