its all lovey dovey ️

1 word to describe undertaker...
he is a...

RAT:v

This was so much fun to read! It's a refreshing fix I'll say. I've seen similar AUs but nothing like this one. As usual, nothing too mushy but so very interesting to read with every new little predicament that arises.

I really enjoyed this, it's well written and lots of fun. Good work!

I love this story. So cute. Awesome job.

Yay! I found one! Vampire Sebastian, and I liked it! XD It satisfied me. XD

Twilight reference? not sure.

anyways, this was good! I liked your descriptions(definitely a better love story then twilight lol) but I feel like you rushed it a bit on some of these parts. Especially towards the end, everything happened a bit way too fast. Maybe added a bit more stuff how Ciel was uncomfortable with his family fearing him and shit when he finally came back home.

The fight scene with undertaker was decent enough, though maybe a bit more fight and tactics instead of just dialogue. Like I get that the story need to continue and stuff but there are Fanfics/books out there that fit in just enough fighting and just enough dialogue perfectly. Especially if undertaker is more experienced than Sebastian it should've taken longer, OR you could've made it a point to say that Sebastian needed to hurry up with because it was going to become daylight soon. You kind of did that but it wasn't too clear..

Otherwise I thoroughly enjoyed it :) This should've been T not M, there was like no smut here. you should've put the warning as suggestive themes but not M. And the theme wasn't too dark either. Especially since Kuroshitsuji fans should know that the anime/manga is dark enough this is nothing compared to that. Just my personal opinion, of course younger kids would think differently.

GJ

That was AWSOME I loved it. Like really awesome. Are you perhaps going to write a sequel to this marvelous story ?

OH MY GOD THIS IS BY FAR THE BEST SEBACIEL FANFICTION I HAVE EVER READ. THANK YOY SO MUCH. NOW EXCUSE ME WHILE I GO CHECK OUT YOUR OTHER STUFF u 333333

I regret not reading this fic sooner, this is wonderful! I totally appreciate that this wasn't smut heavy, if you know what i mean. Light romance like these, make it seem more believable and subtly sweet, whereas sometimes other fics' chapterly sex make me start to think that the other solely use their partner for pleasure making. To be honest, I skip/ skim over smut whenever i encounter one. It's rather boring to me actually.. But I find myself thoroughly reading every word in this fanfiction! Kudos to you! I am looking forward to checking your other works, and i now for sure i wont be disappointed.

Wow, i am surprised i only discovered this fanfic now! This is amazing, youre amazing!

Great epilogue! :)

Still a better love story than Twilight! Lol, this sensuous scene is exactly why many women (and men) back through the ages fantasized about being seduced into submission by a vampire.

Yay, delicious Sebastian to the rescue! I love how he just swept in there all commanding and devilish. :D

Why does it have end...*pouts* this was such a good fanfiction.