Perfectly nailed that mixture of tragedy and love that defines pinecest to me.

Beautiful! Thank you for writing!

I must admit I’m not a big fan of his ship but this was beautiful done. Lovely and it made the idea seem a bit less silly to me. Great job!

Very good story congrats

It is so cute, I really enjoyed it, good job!

I never liked Pinecest, nor did I understand how anyone could even ship them, but... this was beautiful.

Let me just state even though ihave pretty laid back attitude towards everything i dislike the idea of incest of any form. that being said I do enjoy many literary works across many venues and i must applaud the amount of workmanship. It is quite clear that the writer put a lot of love behind this story writing and rewriting the story again and again. You can sense the amount of passion behind this story. while reading this story i did not see i vulgar story of twins having sex. In its place i saw an intricately crafted marbled statue rivaling the works of the greats like da vinci, van goh, and michael angelo. truly this is work of art bearin the heart of its master why its as if the auther forged their very souls into this magnificent artwork. (my sincerest apologies to the author i did not check your name before reading this so i tried to leave out the he's and she's. nice summary by the way very bold and straightforward.)

nice love it

OMAGAHD

I don't get why this concept bothers people. I don't mind it, at all. But that's probably because I watch too much Game of Thrones.

As long as it makes good stories, I could care less.

That being said, I like this one. Short and simple. Would've appreciated the use of their names though, since this can literally apply to any piece of fiction focused on siblings. But whatever. 8/10.

Yikes this is beautiful.

This made me really happy. I enjoyed your style of writing and the way you wrote lemon. Your description was really good. I could like feel Mabel's hair lol. Thanks for a great fanfic!

This is very well written! Saw your pic on DeviantArt that sent me here, and boy am I glad I found this! One of my fave Pinecest fics!

Never watched the show before, but this is still beautiful! And realistic.

So on my first excursion into Gravity Falls fanfiction, I kept seeing all these Pinecest entries, and they just... Ugh. Not just the storyline or themes, but the poor writing style really put me off.
This is not only the first twincest fic I've EVER read, but also the first Gravity Falls fic.

And I am absolutely impressed.

Your summary was accurate - These short story is very realistic. If it wasn't so perfect, I'd beg you to continue on with their journey, perhaps back to Gravity Falls.
But some of the best stories end right were they need to, and leave the rest for the readers to dream.

If you ever write anything again, original or fanfic, please please PM me! I adore your diction and your style!

Loves, Imogene19