I like this story. I hope you didn't quit or something. Awesome story.

OMG how have I not found this before? This is so good please please pleeeeease update!

I loved this! Please continue :):)

Why are there only two chapters of this? It's brilliant! I love the idea of Bakura training Ryou in the art of thievery, it's genius! And hilarious! I hope you update again sometime!

Please finish !

I hope you continue this story. To finally find a good non-yaoi story with the two is great. I think you have the attitudes down. If Bakura is weakened then he would have no choice but to train Ryou up, which will leave him more exasperated. I think it will be hard for both of them. This story has so much potential and I want to see the benefits of the training-'cause it will be hilarious.

Another funny (and kind of heart-wrenching; poor Ryou) chapter! Not much to say this time, other than that this line might be a bit melodramatic:

"It was made from ancient stone and cemented with anguish ."

It made me giggle.

Finally a non yaoi bakura-yami bakura story, really good!

I really enjoyed it. It was good!

Good chapter. I never thought about any actual training Ryou would go through. I like it. Tripping Ryou by shoving him out and back in control was very clever. I'm surprised Bakura isn't working on Ryou's obedience or making Ryou call him sensei or something along those lines.

One thing I'm confused about is that the trip between Ryou's soul room and the training room, it was implied that they ran, but written that they walked out of the soul room.

I really like the chapter and I hope it isn't too long before you update again because this story is very interesting!

I love it! What I think you should do is have more of Bakura's point of view. Anyway can't wait for your next update.

This is promising to be incredibly amusing. Bakura's a little OOC (he's downright sadistic, and hasn't shown any care about Ryou, preferring to do things himself), but it works. And, considering some of the Bakuras I've seen, this really isn't that bad. I also like this Ryou; he's not wimpy like the fandom portrays him, but instead reasonably brave, if scared.

I just have one thing to touch on, really. It's usually best not to announce "Bakura's POV", since it looks a little amateurish. Instead, you can just show that it's from Bakura's POV through line breaks and your writing. You'd do just fine here by removing "Bakura's POV". Don't worry; the readers will catch on.

Good luck on the next chapter! I can't wait to see how Ryou is trained next.

This is really interesting. I haven't seen many stories like this. Practically none that aren't oneshots. So I'm pretty excited about this.

I love how Ryou is so reluctant to be a thief and Bakura's methods of training. I laughed at so much how Ryou is so worried about being arrested for stealing one duck statue. Who would call the cops on the theft of one duck? I thought it was pretty funny when Ryou was freaking out over bumping his chin. I think I agree with Bakura, he was overreacting.

I didn't notice a single spelling or grammar mistake so awesome job there. I'm pretty anxious to see where this is going. I hope to see more soon.

I love this when I read it I was laughing most of the time. I feel bad for ryou and how he is being forced to steal but I can't wait untill you update next.

I enjoyed this thoroughly :) Duck statues win! haha Can't wait to read more!