That was a very beautiful chapter and I had to binge read it. Couldn't put it down.

Loved, loved it.

The song and the reuniting of seto and mokuba were the best parts. I've loved the entire story though. Also, Please don't kill Yami. Him and Yugi are my OTP (One true pairing)

"Off with his head!" the Queen of Hearts roared to the guards.

That was a really good story and I am happy I had the chance to read it. The ending was really satisfying too. It must have been hard for Yugi and yami to be separated but they did the best they could do for their countries. I am sure yugi was a wonderful king. The baby scene was so cute. Yami loving both his son and husband so much. And the little secret resting place was wonderful too.

This was a good ending. I wouldn't want to see yami dying. Plus yugi fought hard. He went against his brother. He fought for his lover and baby. I am so glad. Yes yugi is cute but he is also strong. Dartz is dead and Yami's father and the gods delivered justice. Also it was touching how the dead pharaoh, Yami, and yugi got to have a sweet moment and some closure

You can't kill yami. He has to be there when yugi gives birth. He has to be there when yugi is faced with his brother's wrath. Because Dartz will go insane finding out yugi is pregnant.
Yugi went through so much and always carried this guilt. He must save yami

Ha I knew yugi was pregnant. And of course we knew about the poisoned arrow. Yugi did use his magic. I am sure he can save yami. Their love is stronger than the orichalcos.
It's good you decided to announce to the others that yami was injured. They deserved to know.
So...Isis and Ryou know yugi is pregnant. Now we need yami okay so he can find out too

I believe the arrow scene happened in the anime robin Hood or the movie with real actors. It was good and I was expecting something like that because it is dramatic. Of course yami can't die. I hope yugi will take care of him since you said he is with isis. He has healing magic after all. It's time for him to use it. Ushio got what he deserved. It's not Yami's fault. And I enjoyed the puppyshipping scene

Yup I was wondering that myself. I don't think it is unnecessary killing since those three would kill without a question. Yugi talking while sleeping is adorable. Dartz is simply stupid. Joey and Seto reunited. Seto surely missed his puppy.
The story is going really well. Now let's see the twist

I wonder if yugi is pregnant already. But Ryou seems to be like that too. Does it mean he and Bakura went that far? It was a good chapter. Yami being so sweet. He truly adores yugi.
Yugi telling Bakura and yami about the operation. Now Bakura can be a dad too.
Don't worry about the reviews. 8 reviews per chapter is actually good you know. And the fact people follow your stories mean they like them

Oh this chapter was sad. All these poor people suffering because Dartz is crazy. I remember the sad song from the movie.
It was a good chapter.

Haha a happy reunion. Joey thinks of seto so much. A funny chapter too. The song was nice.

Ah, I am jealous. Yami is so wonderful to Yugi. And yugi is so cute. I am glad everyone is happy. Ryou and Bakura are getting to know each other. Seto and his mutt play together. Mahad will see his family again.

This was the best chapter so far. I remember the movie was funny too but I loved the exchange between yugi and yami. Especially the pan part. Ah so now they are all together again. So great. I am happy

Ah young love. So romantic.
Really nice chapter.