Reviews for When It's Over
LeftHandedPeopleRule chapter 1 . 6/15/2013
No I agree with you completely. Humanity, unfortunately, is full of prejudice. And I'm glad you didn't go down the route of 'everything-is-ok-now-so-we-can-all-live-happily-e ver-after'. I also really sympathise with Ben. And this particular fanfic made me all the more sympathetic towards him.
Great writing.
TimeShard13 chapter 1 . 10/17/2012
I love it. You should write another one.
JDMlvr1 chapter 1 . 7/28/2012
It was good story but sad. I wish ben just beat them all up but what he said worked :)
ebi pers chapter 1 . 7/10/2012
Sad to say I could see this happening. Just look at all the equal rights struggles people face todat WITHOUT an alien invasion! But you went about it the right way: blunt, to the point. It really got the message across without the all-too-typical cliches. Loved Ben's moment when he stood up to his classmates. It was powerful and frighteningly in character. I could envision it so well it was almost like a little Connor Jessup was in my head, reading the lines to me! Another phenomenal job-hope to see more from you soon!
Sirnonenath chapter 1 . 7/10/2012
Very saddening but also believable. Poor Mason family - I really hope that in the show that they all survive the alien invasion and can be there for each other when all is over, as this depicts.
Heracratzarism chapter 1 . 7/10/2012
This story was very well written. Great job! I love Ben's speech in class when everybody's being harsh and malevolent. I can't wait to see what else you write!