Amazing - yet another shitfic where Harry is a doormat.

Yeah - trashfic pile.

So Harry dies towards the end of the sixth book, spends 350 years in Soul Society, then gets resurrected a few months later by the people he knew in the World of the Living? How does that work?
Also- "Where were you when I was trapped at the Dursleys' in a cupboard?" She hadn't heard about him then.
"Where were you when I was forced to kill a basilisk?" Petrified in the hospital wing because she was helping him figure out what it was.
"Where were you when I was attacked by dementors?" Passed out on the ground right next to him.
"Where were you when I fought Voldemort in the Third Task?" In the stands of the Quidditch field, not allowed to even see what happened in the maze, after doing everything she could to help him survive the Tournament.
I know you want to have an edgy Harry who doesn't take anyone's shit, but you just make him an asshole by having him hate the people who helped him every step of the way just because they couldn't be there. And I mean literally, physically, incapable of being there.
Just two chapters, and you already have horrible plot holes.

Your shit writing should be removed for its stupidity and down right reatardednes

Toshiro and Hiro pairing please!

Kitty fight! (ω)

Ugh.

Bullshit forgiveness fic - yeah fuck this. I'm out.

Very good!

Soooo... The shinigami don't know how to deal with a soul fragment... Seriously ?

And here i was hoping for an Ichiruki fic :/

I was disappointed in this story. Good intro only to disappoint me by turning out to still be in the HP school timeframe rather than taking the interesting route of a defender of the innocent in rukongai. Then you shanghaid him into a captaincy because, contrary to his character, he sparred with Zaraki in Seireitei where previously he had been oh so careful. I'll bet further chapters force him into attending Hogwarts as well. Way to fail at understanding that a character like this would loathe attempts to control him. PM me if you want further reasons you need to think up backstories more.

I like toshiro and hermione, luna and yumichika together I can't wait for the next chapter coming up love it

Please more.

lol's that was awesome! I hope you write some more of it sometime!

I like how the story is going and hope that you will update some time in the future.

great story so far.