Oh so sweet thanks for a very good read

wow i hate Jane very much i the beginning, i hate him so much that i wantede to Kill for be so bad to Lisbon, but no i would never kill Jane, very good story, well written, you are a good writer

wow! i love it!

Terrible - could be good if you improve your ESL skills, at least in written English

The premise seems interesting, but your grammar, spelling and punctuation are so bad it is difficult to discern whether the execution is any good.

If you get a beta, please leave a note in your description that it is beta'd. Then i'll be able to read more.

oh my, that was a wonderful ending! i lòoved the mixed feelings of teresa, and how she slowly left herlsef open to his love and tenderness!

Yeah lovely ending!

Aww, dramatic Jisbon fluff! Yay! Love it!

Hmm, things I want clearing up... How that eyres person (sorry if I spelt it wrong) suddenly became red john please, definitely how jane knew it was room 3, how lisbon managed to wake up before she was supposed to (mainly because I don't think red john would have given her a lesser dose or been forgetful), and how she managed to get a gun in the first place, as if red john shot jane, where did the second gun come from, hn and how did lisbon escape from the ropes? However, if I am just being stupid with these questions, feel free to ignore them entirely.

Can't wait to find out! I loved this fic so much!

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OH MY! THIS IS EPIC! Please update soon!

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oh my god, you can0t finish a chaptter like that!it's evil!

Oh very nice one I ike that Jane really care for Lisbon I hope that they will make it

I loved the "you got me" line :)

Update soon!

Wow! Love it! Can't wait for more! What will Patrick say? Does Lisbon still think he hates her? Can't wait for another update! Tomorrow is so far away!

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creepy..definitely, definitely, creepy...

Wooly this is brilliant update soon xx