Oh..
So..
Hot..
Holy shit!

This is serious fapping material! Thank you for writing this

Am I the only one a little creeped out by this story? It's well written and a perfect narrative for stiles but the plot in the beginning sounds so much like rape, and kidnapping, enslavement, and abuse. The possessiveness and controlling behavior is something out of a sick lifetime movie. You're writing style is phenomenal the plot on the other hand makes physically sick.

Completely love this story!

OH MY GOD! I LOVE THIS FANFIC! i read it on Ao3 and fell in love. this is about the fifth time i’ve read this and it’s still amazing. the relationship between Derek and Stiles is amazing. Scott and Allisons relationship is amazing and i love the “Forbidden love” theme that’s going on between those two. although, i’m sad that i didn’t get to see Papa Stilinski more than i would liked, but other than that this is awesome.

Tbh I should also mention i'm just surprised Stiles has lived as long as he has. He's actually pretty irrational in his thinking most of the time. Half the time it's like he's trying to kill himself purposely with the way he goes about things. Granted the whole Alpha Law thing would have anyone reacting strongly to essentially becoming an unknown Alpha's concubine for for life, most especially a virginal warm blooded American boy. Yet, when he could just sit down and actually talk to respective person and treat him with respect he just walks all over him or decides things for himself. I get the need to know things out of curiosity, and almost deserving to know. He just makes a mess of things is all. Stiles does a lot, I mean a lot of stupid things that could have saved others or himself in lesser amount of time if he wasn't such a self righteous opinionated person. He knows it too, but apparently doesn't even give much thought to further acknowledging it. Wow again I really like the plot but yeah i think I officially think Stiles is the worst. Again I repeat how Derek dealt with him, must be a testament of love.

I have to say i've watched maybe a couple of Teen Wolf episodes so thought I'd give reading some of the fanfiction a try and just happened upon yours. While I honestly enjoyed the plot of your story. I've actually come to realization that I actually may not even like Stiles as harsh as it seems. Or rather maybe I dislike him because he's too much like the expected sidekick trope. A smart alack, funny guy who maybe relies on his loyalty, witty humor, and smarts too much. While he seems to be a great friend to Scott and the whole saving Beacon Hills most of the time thing, him as a stand alone character is egotistic, selfish, insensitive, and filled with a hero complex the size of the sun(granted Scott was too). But I really did appreciate how you thoroughly flushed out Stiles character, providing deep insight into his thinking. I think one of the best moments that infers all of the points I mentioned before was his admittance to Derek he was "sorry" for snooping into Derek's painful past. He was sorry for getting caught that is. Stiles is interesting in this way because he actually knows he's kind of shit at least where it comes to human interaction and his sense of self-preservation for himself and his friends trumps everything else. This tends to make him speak before his thinks and do things most would consider very stupid, because of his often flawed logic. He might be academically smart, but he can act like an angsty stupid teenager a greater portion of the time. Which of course makes him human. A parent would usually refer to their child with such behavior as an endearing "little shit". Okay maybe deep down I do like Stiles, the kid just has a serious amount of growing up to do. I actually really enjoyed your Derek a lot too because I wouldn't even have the patience to deal with Stiles for a minute. Stiles vapid way of thinking is so inline with a adderall ridden youth. You very much accomplished what a adderall reliant teenagers are prone to, unstoppable rambling and manic episodes. i admittedly had to skip paragraphs at time, because I'm sure it was necessary repetition to keep Stile's way of thinking fluid, but it was too on the nose for me. This isn't to say that I disliked your Stiles, in fact I think it's very inline with his charter in the television series. I have to commend you for keeping me as reader, and providing me reasons as to why finishing your story- as it truly did play out as an episode of Teen Wolf just with it solely focused on the usually lesser sidekick- was only in my best fictional interests. You did a great job of writing this. Hope you continue to write more.

God you do not know how absolutely STOKED I am that this story which I found out of the blue on archiveofourown is also on this website where I actually have an account and can follow it and save it to my favorites.

Wow. Seriously I never bother reading a fic this long but the perfectly written Stiles' POV just had me reading on and on. Perfection. And hot. Seriously hot.

I know this is a pwp story... So I can forgive the weird Alpha law, the sheriff father who isn't too worried about his underage son being taken for forced mating (rape?), Scott behaving like his Best Friend is going overseas to study for a few years even though he's the one who explained this "marriage" is a friendship deal breaker for life... What really prompted me to write the review was when Stiles father made Derick promise him that he would make sure that Stiles will do his homework. I had a good laugh so thanks for that.

Even though I'm only at chapter 2, I can see your Stiles character is rather spot on. So puting aside the OOCs and the PWP, I'm forging on to chapter 3.

"Creepy werewolf soccer mom." Oh my god I love you. XD marry me!

FAN!~

Holy fuck. This was literally the first fic I read on teen wolf and Damn am I glad I chose this one!

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Best mate story I've ever read. Best werewolf story I've ever read. Best Stiles/Derek story I've ever read. From the first chapter to the last, you managed to embody everything that is Stiles into an amazing narrative that channels the very souls of each character of the show in here. I hope that made sense cause honestly this is one of my favorite Teen Wolf stories on this site.