Amazingly story ever best to read it awesome with your other first story to the sequel to it.

Well,it would be interesting to see Gaz going back to Wonderland,and maybe with a little more hints to American McGee's Alice,like the missions of each chapter,or the weapons,...Thank you for letting us enjoy this story!

Good job with the fight,and Cheshire's last minutes with the Hatter, that's fact,it was touching when Hatter reacts and notices he hurt Cheshire and regrets 's see the ZAGR return to their world

Oh,dear Lord,Tweedledee really paid for his I feel sorry for poor Gaz,the trauma it must have caused,specially when he asked for like she had seen Dib die in a gruesome way twice.
I'm so glad Zim ,I was expecting Gaz to beat the Hatter,but it would be nice if our dear Irken can defeat him as well

Oh,Tweedledee 's screwed,the Hatter will make him pay for torturing Gaz.I just hope it doesn't give it nasy ideas,or else she would jump from the frying pan to the fire

Aw,our little Zimmy has grown up,as Gaz really bice to know he has grown that close to ! Zombie Tweedledee!At first,I thought Cheshire had something to do,since he was alone with him,but since it took himby surprise...Let's find out

*sob*Tweedledee 's departure was heartbreaking,specially by the way it affected Gaz and Cheshire. Oh,I was hoping Zim would show up,it was romantic indeed how they met at the his mask was red,makes me think he went as Voltar from The League of Super Evil,'cause God both are so similar XD.I'm curious,though,his lips were at view,didn't the green color give a clue?It was a nice touch to make Cheshire use the Bachelor/Bacheloret party as excuse

Mmm,nice job with the wedding.I was afraid,though,that the Hatter would bring people from the real world,like Dib,Zim or Professor Tweedledee, he finally snapped,amd sadly he has turned into a menace for Gaz

I really hope the Hatter didn't end up taking her right after she accepted her proposal,because I was left with that if he keeps it old school he will wait for the honeymoon.
God,poor Cheshire.I'm glad,though,that he keeps helping Gaz

I always find touching when a girl gives up her love even lying about her feelings as long as she can save the one they care really was heartbreaking when Cheshire saw his master on Zim's shape

Indeed,poor Gaz,what a terrifying experience to deal with the possibility of being raped night after ouch for the Hatter,now that he's aware of the rejection and the fact that she thinks about Zim.
Huh,could that be a spoiler?An Alice version of Gaz somewhere?Because that would be a solution too,like Frankenstein's bride

Why Zim's own tears burn him?We have seen Irkens crying,like Skoodge in the first episode,and his tears didn't burn his because they aren't made of water but other Irken fluids.
It was moving how Zim broke down and Dib tried to help him,even when he wasn't 's see how it goes when Zim faces the Hatter

Aw,is so touching to see Zim being a loyal boyfriend and visiting Gaz every breaks my heart to see him suffering and missing her that much,just like the fact that she gave up and let herself be with the Hatter

Wow,that was hard to read since Tak is one of my fav characters,just like Gaz,Zim and ,you did a good job with the White Queen's monstruous change and their fight. Uh,oh,if Gaz shuts down the Hatter's PAK,wouldn't that affect the real Zim as well?

Well,not even the review from the Desktop version shows up,so I guess they have to be approved for so,no biggie.
Anyway,I forgot to mention that the fact that Cheshire is a dog-like feline reminds me of this actual piece from Lewis Carrol's story:'

And how do you know that you're mad?'

'To begin with,' said the Cat, 'a dog's not mad. You grant that?'

'I suppose so,' said Alice.

'Well, then,' the Cat went on, 'you see, a dog growls when it's angry, and wags its tail when it's pleased. Now I growl when I'm pleased, and wag my tail when I'm angry. Therefore I'm mad.'

'I call it purring, not growling,' said Alice.

'Call it what you like,' said the Cat.