Serves u right imetsu. Ty for ur hard work!

There's only one thing I could say here... GOOD LUCK VONGOLA! :D

This was really good.

Interesting story! I enjoyed reading it! xD

Love It! More?
gonna go read "Fall From Grace" Now!
Belle 3

Very philosophical and profound. I hope you expand on this.

Wow! This story is awesome! love it!

"But that does not mean that Vongola will leave Tsuna alone."
What a foreboding statement. (And as said, I have come to leave a review. :D)
A lovely lovely piece. The part about Tsuna's talent with languages was a bit unexpected, but interesting. I suppose that if Tsuna were to have been given the proper instruction at an age where he had not been as less self-demeaning as he later was/is, something could turn out like this...
The interchanging parts with your other story "The Application of Virtue", make for a very interesting back-and-forth effect.

-Sevenisthemagicnumber

I thoroughly enjoyed this story! Loved the flow of it, especially Tsuna's growth :)
Thanks for writing!

This sounds very interesting. I would love to read it. Please post it as soon as you can.

I'm interested in reading Fall from Grace :3

So, It's official now. You're one of my favorite authors here XD I just love the way you write! It's really.. simple, but detailed at the same time, and when I read it I don't know what to do with myself! I also love all of your OC's too, and cried when the grandpa died... and how Nana was becoming depressed...

If you ever have free time, would it be bad to consider continuing this? It's beautiful on it's own like this, so I'm not demanding a sequel or a continuation of any sorts... but If you do decide to continue this (because it has potential for that) then I think that would be fine to! I just really like it for some reason!

Ah I might just read this again for the sake of reading goof fanfiction...

The end? That it? Aww, you could have written mire! It'll be good for a multi chapts one. Even if it is full of OCs. But the OCs aren't too bad, they were nice. Love this story. Love it.

I love everything about this! It's ridiculously well written and has an amazing flow that makes everything easy to follow.

However, I disliked how it ended because it leaves the reader wanting to know 'What next ?'
It leave too much room to ask for more, and makes you believe this might be a two shot, rather than a one shot.

But other then that I'm awe stuck and elated that I got the chance to read something like this.

- Psychotic Tendency

This is a great story. I love the plot twists and I hope you can continue this.