| Reviews for My Xeno |
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  Unknown chapter 15 . 6/8/2019 Before I say anything on the book you have here I just want to say that unknown is not my name but I put it there because my name is only to be given to friends. Even fake online names I make people earn. But on a more important note I have monitored this story since 2014 and I am still sad to see that you have not updated it yet. I would love to see an update to what I see as a truly remarkable story. |
| sonic chapter 14 . 4/9/2019 good chapter! |
| f2bhbydbbubub chapter 15 . 9/8/2015 Either one is OK. I don't mind |
 Talon Searunner chapter 15 . 12/14/2014 all at once please |
| NHarem Foreva chapter 15 . 4/24/2014 all at once please |
| Teshy chapter 15 . 4/23/2014 my vote is post them as you go. :) |
| Wolfy Loveland chapter 15 . 4/22/2014 One at a time, let's ride this rollercoaster from beginning to end again! |
| leftfordead762 chapter 14 . 3/26/2014 This is really great |
| amber.lincoln3 chapter 14 . 1/30/2014 OMG Cute! |
| slimfishy chapter 14 . 1/5/2014 Wonderful story |
| Teshy chapter 14 . 10/25/2013 I really love the story so far. I just stumbled onto it a day ago. Very good writing I can wait to see where it goes. I think that Will and Silvia would make such a cute couple! I can't wait to read more. great job! :) |
| MaiWishes chapter 3 . 7/12/2013 Gee, I feel like Id loose a few IQ points if I read any further. What a mess. Clean up your story before posting it for others to read. It looks like you've never read a book in your life either. The offer to beta is canceled |
| MaiWishes chapter 1 . 7/12/2013 Im surprised no one tried to help you with this chapter yet. There are really a lot of mistakes and normally a few mistakes never bother me. You should proofread your chapters, I'm not trying to be an asshole but honestly it looks lazy, half the time Will wasn't even capitalized. Also, don't put authors notes inside the chapter ever, it pulls the reader out of the story. But its a really good and interesting first chapter. Number six is pretty cute. Im willing to edit this chapter and message you that version if you will replace it with this one. |
| Dovahzeymah chapter 10 . 5/17/2013 Very nice story so far; albeit far off the rails when compared to the AVP movies. Xenomorphs do die of old age and there is one queen per hive. The xenomorph home world you mention has one Queen and 10's of bilions of drones. When a new hive is to be started on a new planet a xenosite/face hugger bearing a Queen egg will attach itself to a host and impregnate him/her with the queen and then it grows into the hive we all know later on. As it always has been. I just thought I'd inform you of the differences in your story. Dovahzeymah. |
| AlphaRidley chapter 3 . 4/13/2013 I would be willing to beta read for you if you would like, but that's your choice. |
