Intersting take on Tim being Batman

Ok...ay
Everyone are dead and they becom ghosts. Tim & Dami are... Not fighting and still alive. Ummmm feeling a little confused of what really happened but oh well.

I think I liked this, but really couldn't figure out what was going on

... Okay, I'm confused. Weren't Tim adn Dami teh only survivors of some war? It the last scene with ghosts? I don't know if it's sleep deprivation talking or not, but I am really baffled here. . Over all good concept.

Wow. This is amazing. This is not just writing practice. It is awesome work!

I read all of this at once and found it quite an intriguing story. With the rest of the Batfamily dead, and Tim and Damian were the only ones left behind, I could see Tim being in shell shock, going through the motions of having to take up the mantle in a world where there was little crime. And Tim seeing that Tim was merely existing and choosing to help him, to bring him out of that stuper, to help him choose to live rather than exist. And letting go of the hatred that had been a part of their lives when they were younger. A very interesting story indeed.

Oh please make it have a happy ending, if we can't have it happen often in real life, at least give Tim and Damian a Happy ending o

It should end happy. Tim needs happiness. Dami needs happiness. End it happy.

Please continue :DD

I like the idea you've got here. Very original and amazingly written :)

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Fantastic job!

That's so sad but I like how Damian was trying to clean the dirty but the best part was when he yelled at Tim. 'This isn't living' was so impacting.

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Omg god. Poor Damian and Poor Tim. But I like how Damian is refusing to give up or give in.