I know this is a very old story, but it’s the best Derek/OC story I have read so far. I like that you really built up the character before throwing her into the narrative. Also, she’s different from other OCs that I’ve read. I think Derek is pretty true to the series and the other characters too. The only thing that breaks my heart is that she dislikes Stiles, but it makes sense with the direction of her character. Anyways, I just wanted to leave a review because I think the story deserves more. Great job!

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Florence The Machine - awesome

love your story. question i hope that you see me couse im staring at you but when you look over you look right through thn you lean and kiss her on the head and iv never felt so alive and so dead is that a song if so who sings it.

8 more months and a life time of therapy. I love it.

I LOVED this story! Thank you Sooooo much for it!

I have yet to read the chapter, but I had to comment on your author's note at the beginning...THANK YOU! I will actually stop reading stories most of the time if teenage pregnancy is involved for so many of the reasons you listed. I am so flipping happy that you refuse to have her become pregnant. I mean sure, after a relationship is established and she is no longer a teenager, I can support that. So just thank you for refusing to include that cliche.

I feel like this is a bit iconic. Like Paige from 3x08? The flash back from Derek's past? Is that it? Is that why you wrote this because if it is it's pretty good.

lol she just straight up asks what gender he likes

oh wow he bit her

lol this poor girl