Oh come on I would love to read the rest please update soon

Write more! I check everyday for more!

More please

I really like where this is going! The story has a great plot, and I love that Zuko is there! one thing about grammar, you are using the wrong "there", some of them should be "their". Just so you know. Please continue! I love this!

continue, i enjoy this deeply

Really great story :)

Alot better than the last ONE!

Since you implied the fact Korra knows the fact that she's the avatar. How has she been hiding from everyone if Zuko thought he knew her from "somewhere? Just update and check for mistakes while you write.

So is she still the Avatar? Can't wait for more!

I felt if I enter the Twlight Zone reading this

I have to say you improve quite a bit and this more enjoyable reading, but you're not out of the ballparkyet. There were some spelling and grammatical errors such as lack of capitalization, typos, and lack of spacing along with a few needed commons ; but other than that this story has good potential. Not to mention more enjoyable than "Street Rats." Not to be rude, but you have a book tile with low caps since "Cursed" is suppose no need to be capitalization just like its above . Also this bothers me mako sat by the fire lost in his own thoughts. He hoped that allowing korra because you forgot capitalization Mako AND Korra. So I hope you rewrite some of this chapter I know you thought you were ready to post, but double check our work and it may not be in our best interest to use a school computer for our work like you mention when you were giving our readers in our last story bullshit.

I'm pretty sure you're full of it in real life too, but on the web people do not like more so on here. Because we came here read good fictional stories not Bullshit you and other writers give us. Also word of advice "Take others people's advice" and that means writing. So if you want Bryan and Michael to read this you better make this damn good when do they read this.

Will the brothers ever find out who she's and how did Korra's rents die? If I was you I would redo this chapter by a little bit since its fucking confusing on some parts. Piece of Advice dont say big deal in A.N. when you mentioned some mistakes past you by. Because I know you had the Nazi Grammar Police come after u on the last story. So hun I suggest a Betta reader and read it over not 2, but 4 times and using rough drafts on the chapters. To fix any mistakes or make changes then upload them. Honestly it'll make our writing better and I would suggest writing in a notebook to make our writing better in life. Since the saying for writers go "You write how you talk." That will make you better also take down our other story. Since you live and learn from it. Also you have this up now and it looks decent. However I suggest you upcase "Cursed" and don't have a sucky summary that reminds people of a crumpled up note.

It seems better than the last one although you still have grammar mistakes and it doesn't seem like a Tragedy Rom story more like Crime Frienship/Rom since Korra's the avatar and fighting crime is the avatar's job. How old is everybody in here becuase Im confused since you gave no hint

Its a little improvement from "Street Rats" although you still have alot to learn. Some of time its from experience others are advice like the boys who lived here a fire bender named Mako and his earth bending brother Bolin were kind enough to let her stay the night on account of the rain but I cost her a can of beans for their shared diner but she planned on eating it anyway.

The should be capalize since it start of a sentence and I should be it since I presume that what you meant to write also there should be a common something that looks like , place the word. united republic should be United Republic as its a country like the United States. You also most their the first letter of their names in caps and also the title should be "Cursed" along with a update summary since I don't feel its has enough info also I know you said you suck at summaries, but how this for a glander

"Korra has a dark past ever since came to the city when she was six. Soon after she was orphaned which she blames herself for it. So she made herself a promise not to get attached to anyone although that's broken when she meets Mako."

Since the first one 'korra mako and bolin are orphans. when the brothers invite korra to live with them but she is hounted by the loss of her family that occored on a day she as a water should relish the coming of. who can help her and will they get off the streets. i know i suck at summarys. i dont own anything. Doesn't help and also telling people you suck at the summary is a no go since people can tell if the summary's awful. Instead of the writer tell that to them image if every publish book on sale would have on the book's Overview. That'll draw customers away. Don't say Grammar and Spelling Errors are not a big deal you live in the USA so don't tell me you haven't been to a English Class in our life. I have see my friend with dyslexia write better than you can. So doesn't that mean anything to you because I sincerely mean every word on this review. Since you pay no attention criticism that people have given you to be better. If you can't take the heat along with the harsh criticism then you don't even belong HERE on the website!

Does she know she is the avatar?