Bruh its Slifer Red

How about you continue the sequel for once? -.-

I love this story it was awesome can't wait to read the sequel.

If Naruto knew he probably would've painted Jaden from the get-go.

*smashes Omake Chazz with a mallet* I love the Paradox Brothers because they talk in Rhyme! Also Pharoh is a big love blob.

That was a good omake. I could actually see Seto saying that with a smirk.

That omake was in bad taste with the drama and seriousness of the chapter.

Liked the Omake.

Yeah I think Naruto's good for Alexis. I mean it was obvious in the anime that she liked Jaden, but he was just so oblivious, way worse than Naruto was with Hinata.

Esse deve ser o pior Naruto que já vi em todas as fanfic que li. Eu lembro de ter lido essa história antes, mas eu não lembro de ser tão ruim, e muito menos de um Naruto não hipócrita, arrogante e irritante.

With your re-write recently published I thought I would come back and read this again, how on earth I ever got through this and liked it somewhat the first time is a miracle. Literally.

Naruto isn't cool, he isn't funny and he is a massive hypocrite. All the girls love him, all the guys hate and want to be him, his 'Epic Duel' that everyone loved wasn't epic in the slightest and he seems to dislike Jaden for literally no reason. Yes Jaden might get lucky draws but he plays well with the cards he has at the time, is even more hypocritical when Naruto even acknowledges several times that luck does play a major part in Duel Monsters. It seems he dislikes Jaden just for the sake of disliking Jaden? I don't get it.

Another big turn off on this fic is that you constantly insert yourself into the fic, describing the announcer (Lets call him jacket guy.) Describing Jaden as Kuriboh Head (Naruto will refer to people by nicknames or whatever until he learns their name.) It doesn't look good, if you have these thoughts and you find them important then put them in an Authors Note at the start of the fic. It is annoying having it appear anywhere when you are reading.

I am gonna speed run through this because for some reason I don't remember this fic being anywhere near as bad as it is at the start here. Perhaps you got better as time went on and that is why you are doing a reboot.

Hoping this is true, looking out for your reboot anyways. I enjoyed the 1st Chapter!

Um they do realize that after naruto wins and for some reason they don't kill him and everyone anyway that all of them are going to prison...

Um no, fuck Alexis you should have just used curse of jashin

All the girls seem to love and blush when he merely grins, check.
Other guys take notice and are perhaps jealous, check.
Unnecessary comment about thanking god that the *girls* find Naruto attractive and not the *boys* cus god forbid gays/bi/pansexual characters exist and aren't immediately ridiculed in some way by the "straight" characters, check.
Naruto being way too full of himself like a certain duck-butt haired Shinobi aka Sasuke, check.
No proofread whatsoever, CHECK.
Lastly, constant and completely asinine need for the writer to interject at random times to insert their own commentary in some way or form, immediately breaking the immersion a reader should have when they read a piece of literature, check.

Frankly, kudos to you for having the balls to create this x-over and having gone as far as you did with the material. But Godspeed to any reader that can get past chapter 1 with all the flaws and cons I just listed up above cus I certainly can't.

Have a good All the girls seem to love and blush when he merely grins, check.
Other guys take notice and are perhaps jealous, check.
Unnecessary comment about thanking god that the *girls* find Naruto attractive and not the *boys* cus god forbid gays/bi/pansexual characters exist and aren't immediately ridiculed in some way by the "straight" characters, check.
Naruto being way too full of himself like a certain duck-butt haired Shinobi aka Sasuke, check.
No proofread whatsoever, CHECK.
Lastly, constant and completely asinine need for the writer to interject at random times to insert their own commentary in some way or form, immediately breaking the immersion a reader should have when they read a piece of literature, check.

Frankly, kudos to you for having the balls to create this x-over and having gone as far as you did with the material. But if Godspeed to any reader that can get past chapter 1 with all the flaws and cons I just listed up above cus I certainly can't.

Have a good day.

I hoped that it was the same Haku as in the real one since that could mean that she can be part of the pairing and yes I am aware that it is aleady finished but ow well