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WAIT IN ONE OF THE CHAPTERS IT SAID MARK AND THE DOC IT MARK ZIMMERMAN I NEED A EXPLANATION

I'm going to cry.

This fic has left me heartbroken, I probably shouldn't be content with that, but it was much more than your average hetalia unit fic, it included action, suspense, and pretty much everything else necessary for a good thriller! It was an outstanding fic overall

I want to cry

I expected that

I almost sobbed...

This...CANNOT BE THE END!
No, really. Bad things happened, and your not even going to give them a chance to get it right! I mean, wtf?
Okay, please. If you ever happen to read this (you probably won’t but just in case), please at least try to give her some closure. You can write an alternate ending, you can even just blank everything and write about happy times after some crazy s**t went down, but really! Please!
At least give them a *chance* to have a happy ending...

That has got to be one of the saddest endings I have ever read. The story took such an unexpected turn that I almost had a heart attack! There were so many interesting dark themes and the bit where she decided that everything was not worth livig for was so real.. brilliant story!

I don't know if I want to scream in rage or cry. Probably both. Just... wow, talk about going from happy to brutal murder. I'm really sad and angry about the ending, but it made logical sense. It was one girl against a whole organization. Obviously the organization would win. (Btw who is Mark? Dun dun dun.)

I'm internally crying for America and everyone else. (You have to try better to make me actually cry haha.) The moody teenager was honestly my favorite character, despite him being such an ass. Erm, I was a bit disappointed that when he was losing his sight, he only had to get glasses and didn't actually become blind, but I like how you related it to the modern America and brought up War for Independence America's angst. Yay for angst! I was also hoping that the units would be able to bypass their programming and develop their own personality, but welp, the ending happened. I was really looking forward to America and England becoming friends, although not as much as America and Russia becoming best buddies. I can just imagine all the mischief the two would do if their friends. Which reminds me to a question: can units grow older physically, or do they remain the same age forever? Because it will definitely suck if anyone young (like Canada or America) can never grow physically, while they have the mind of someone older. England and Russia are ok because they will always be in their primes. At their ages it would ideal if they didn't have to age (much).

I'm glad that Anthony redeemed himself. I was shocked with what happened to him, and that made me realize that people were actually going to die in this story. Darn. Not trying to disrespect Anthony, but I was hoping that Brent and Lily would hook up after Anthony broke up with Lily. Brent was my second favorite character. So sad he went missing. I hope he is in the sequel.

I was expecting that the pills the FMBDS gave to Lily would completely wipe her memory and she would end up working for them, but I guess they're not as cruel as they seemed to be. I mean, it would be completely ironic and terrible if she unknowningly ended up working for the company she hated. At least the ending you gave tied up the story.

Aw, Russia is so sweet here. Nice chapter, by the way. :)

Stalin's bitch!? That's priceless. So Stalin really made Mother Russia his bitch. XD Now I can't stop thinking of that ERB episode with Stalin. XD

America and Korea are in serious trouble now. Why must America be acting like the typical rebellious teen? Oh right, because he was a teen in his Revolutionary War days. *derp*

Anyway, nice chapter.

So... South Korea, huh. At least, he's not that pervy like the original. Plus the food you mentioned that was made by Korea looks so tasty in my imagination. It reminds me of that episode in Adventure Time when Jake cooked some Korean food and all of those delicious food goes to waste, because of Finn craving for apple pie. *face palm*

Revolutionary War America. Huh. Still gotta love him though. Although he was acting a bit goofy in some strips in a Christmas event (forgot though). The ending was cute.

GAHH! SO CUTE!