Overall pretty good. There were a few grammatical things here and there but nothing overly distracting. The dialogue is humorous and flows well. Great job!

These digimons are funny. :D I haven't watch the series for ages, so cannot say much... But I liked the chapter :) Are you going to continue, by any chance?

I wonder... Why haven't you been promoting your fic when it was your Blitz week? :P Anyway, I hate owing people reviews that we are supposed to give them (hardly anyone does, but still), so here I am!

"She wasn't exactly a fan of school, anyway." XD True... Who has been?

Ouch. Just when it seems they have won, some random what? comes again? Interesting... I enjoyed it.

I like the twins too! They were really cute and so were the Tanemon. :)

Aww, it certainly felt like a regular tv episode. Willow was cute and likeable, and I smiled when she punched the gazimon, too. Sunmon and Coronamon's descriptions were pretty good; I would have liked a little more description on Coronamon. I couldn't quite picture him in my head clear enough. Maybe because when the Digimon evolve, they were always a little more epic in both personality and physical attributes. That might have been put me off a little.

Overall, I liked it enough to keep following. I miss watching anime at times, but it's not something I want to devote my time to anymore. I think I'll satisfy my little cravings with fics like this one. :)

Happy writing!

So far, I LOVE this. I just hope you update quickly. I can't wait to read more!

Hey, Incinirmatt here. This was a pretty good first chapter. Few errors here and there, but it shows promise.

The only thing I really suggest changing is the description of when she wakes up in the dungeon. And perhaps give some more description on the characters. I don't know shit about them, except that the main character, Will, goes to middle school. Alright, scratch that. The story needs more description. I mean, you gave one for the digimon, but not the best for when it matters. I mean, I can easily look up the other digimon, but I can't do that for the story.

So here are the descriptions I think you should give.

1. Character description for Will.

2. Better description for the dungeon that Will wakes up in. I seriously had no idea if she was in the cage with the Gazimon or not.

Still. Great story though. V_V