Take that you child abusing jackass! Have fun becoming someone's bitch. My advise is don't drop the soap.

I really like this story. Love your version of spencer in this one too. It went kinda fast and at some points it was kinda confusing, but other than that it was great!

I knew Reid wasn't going to shoot anyone but man I was still scared. You wrote this beautifully, it seems as if you were made to write these types of stories. Keep it up, please.

CHAPTER THREE IS MY OTC

I really liked the Ethan/Reid pairing. I know many people write Reid as having no social life outside the team, but I always think it's nice when he has other friends. Most authors forget Ethan exists, though I guess that's understandable, considering he was around present or really mentioned in one episode.

I do feel that the transition was a bit abrupt, going from a fic about Reid teaching Jack to skateboard to a fic about Reid and his deadbeat dad. I understand how you wanted it to connect, but the two stories didn't flow well as presented, and seemed forced together. I feel like the development could have been more natural, with more introspection, and interaction and dialogue between characters. This is amplified, I think, by the somewhat sudden ending.

However, I also understand how hard it is to continue with a story you are no longer interested in, and I know many writes, fanfiction and professional, struggle with writing organic conclusions.

Garcia was awful to Reid. I've never so badly wanted to jump into a fic and shake a character before. I thought she was obnoxious, intrusive, and somewhat voyeuristic with her nosiness about Reid's sex life, and taking pictures of Reid and Ethan was outright terrible, especially considering Reid was verging on a mental breakdown. I was hoping Morgan would intervene the first time, and at the second that Ethan's "pointed look" at Hotch would lead to him having a frank discussion with Garcia. If you ever write any type of continuation of this story, or some kind of follow up, I would really like to see Garcia's complete insensitivity towards Reid addressed. I'm sure others would as well.

I do really enjoy the way you write Rossi's relationship with Reid. While he gives Reid his space and doesn't condescend to him like the others, he's there to help Reid after his panic attack and is willing to step between Reid and Hotch. He's Reid's wise, older friend who gives him the space he needs, and it's really nice to see that, if you were ever inclined to write a fic about Reid and Rossi, I'd love to read it.

Overall, I thought this story was good, but could have used a bit more development, but I understand you wanted to finally finish it. I eagerly await more stories from you.

love it

Ah, man that was an abrupt ending! It's too soon, I wanted you to keep going, lol. Anyways, I loved it. It was awesome, and I loved how you played Reid! Keep it up, please :)

I like you, really I do:-) You start these powerful, attention grabbing stories and...stop..."motivate me to write more," OMG! You need motivation and I'm here to appease that need!
You are a Talented Storyteller
You are a Gifted Writer
You make me Excited when I read your stories
You Capture My Attention which is very hard to do (ADHD)
You Are The Shit!
Are Ya Feeling Motivated?
I can say more just let me know:-)

Wow that had the look of continuing to being a great story, just keep that bitch Garcia out of it, just a bit disappointed that Morgan told about Reid with Ethan. I had my hopes up for the boys to eventually get their shit together and be a couple oh well I can fantasize that on my own. It was good, loved that you segued into a 5 chapter story, wish there were more and that Morgan had played a bigger part in the story, but c'est la vie, it was good. Just wish Garcia would seriously go AWAY. Hate her. Mwah loved it.

First of all I'm pissed off with Morgan, and secondly , will someone kill that fucking bitch, she just damned ruined the story, what is the matter with that cunt, I hate her so much, ok I think I'm okay I have to skip over that whole episode, kill that fucking bitch, I so hate her, if I had a knife I'd gladly go to jail for killing her. Write more when I finish this chapter. Does that twat ever let up, geez, someone stick her in her whatever the fuck she calls it, close the door and lock it, damn I hate that bitch, crap I was hoping Derek would be part of Reid's rescue, he is the one who should be protecting Spencer, get Ethan back to New Orleans where he belongs. Holding my breath, Morgan needs to step up to the plate.

Well, the slash was fine, just it should have been Morgan, get rid of Ethan and let Morgan take his place where he belongs, by Reid's side, though I did love the "he doesn't let me do that anymore" throwaway line. Smirk, cute but I want him with Morgan, pleeezeeee

Awww, that was nice of Hotch to recognize what Spencer had gone through, and then poor baby had to tell him to back off, I feel so sorry for him sometimes, though I know he wouldn't like anyone feeling sorry for him. But I do. Hope there isn't going to be any romance between Ethan and Spencer, any romance belongs only between Spencer and Derek. Looking forward to new chapter, this sounds interesting. I would love to see Spencer all kitted out in his skateboarding mufti. Bet he looks as cute as a button.

That was sweet, I like that Spencer kept the kid safe, and that he insisted that he had to be safe. it was a nice story, I think it worked fine being a bit serious, loved the way Reid reacted bringing Aaron up short, reminding him to get his temper under control. Good lesson for Aaron to learn. loved Rossi's part in it. Yeah, keep it up. I love boyish Spencer kind of fits his alter ego, MGG's personality. very nicely done.

Cool story.

This was suck an awesome story! Great job!