I want more! Please! This is perfect!

the end has a tragic angst feel to me... But it could be the knowledge of what was in the book versus here.. great either way!

This was awesome!

He. Kissed. Hermione. :O

good but you should have continued it would have made the story much better not saying that it's bad because its a great story just continueing it could have made it a sumge better

i really liked this. should be more chapters to it though. lol

Well-written, but his eyes are gray.

No next chapter? -.- NAO UPDATE!

really really good, best story I've read all morning :) Liked all of it :)

I LOVE THIS I LOVE THIS I LOVE THIS I LOVE THIS I LOVE THIS I LOVE THIS I LOVE THIS I LOVE THIS! Whenever I conjure a 6th year Dramione fantasy (which I often x3) it is almost exactly like this: simple words, subtle, yet powerful gestures, and less than extravagent emotions. Problem is, I've never been able to write that down in a good story :/ So for this fantabulous work of literature, I thank you! *removes hat and bows*

Also I'm in the process of struggling through "My Immortal" which, if you don't know, is THE WORST fanfiction in the history of fanfictions and an insult to writers, Harry Potter, and the alphabet! (I had read a couple of chapters with commentary, and I wanted to see just how bad the whole thing was O.O ) Your story helped me regain faith in humanity.

And now that I've finished my praise/rant, I have one thing to say:

Bye bye Horace (- APWBD [HBP])