| Reviews for Heartlines |
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Nazanin chapter 1 . 2/22 Wow! I had read your fiction maybe 5 years ago and recently, I was looking for it on the net, thankfully I found it again and it was so pleasant to read it for the second time. Good one! |
Straight Gate chapter 36 . 12/11/2019 I 100 percent agree with the last line of this chapter. Permanently intertwined... Merlin and Morgana as it should've been and should be. |
Straight Gate chapter 32 . 12/10/2019 The burnt cheese sandwich episode is awesome. |
Straight Gate chapter 19 . 12/10/2019 In real life Gwaine-Eoin Macken, and Tom Hopper-Percival, is straight. You besmirch them in this story making them gay. That and the drinking are my big complaints about this story. I t would truly be awesome if you had them all quit like you had Merlin and Morgana quit smoking. I have read this story before as it is so well crafted. And Merlin and Morgana get married in the end. They belong together. |
Crowley chapter 1 . 11/9/2019 Adele - Shut. Up. No one literally cares. It is called fanfiction. I’m actually struggling to grasp that you sent the same homophobic complaint a dozen times over a whole year. |
lisac0304 chapter 37 . 9/6/2019 A rather tedious story, far too much Merlin and Morgana drama. Arthur and Gwen are much more interesting. |
lisac0304 chapter 35 . 9/6/2019 Fatfillion and Firefly? Ugh! Gag me with a spoon! |
Adele chapter 37 . 8/6/2019 In real life Tom Hopper is not gay. He is married to a beautiful woman and they have a baby. You do him and eoin macken a real disservice by misrepresenting them as gay. Otherwise, I love that Merlin and Morgana got married and Morgana has happy dreams about their future family. Also, I love that hunith and balinor are reunited. I love happy endings. |
Adele chapter 30 . 8/6/2019 I really like this story except for Gwaine and Percival being involved. You do know in real life they are both straight and Tom Hopper who plays Percival is married to a beautiful woman and has a child. I hope you change this aspect so Percival falls in love with one of Gwaine's sisters and Gwaine falls for a woman as well. |
Adele chapter 37 . 8/27/2018 I liked this story. Just wondering why somebody didn't have sisters for Gwaine and Percival to fall in love with? In real life Gwaine and Percival, eoin and Tom are straight. Even in legend they are straight. Otherwise I enjoyed the story very much. I always love a good mergana fic that has a happy ending. |
Adele chapter 30 . 8/27/2018 Everybody's birthday dets celebr |
Guest chapter 25 . 8/27/2018 Your story has substance. Lots of angst in this chapter. At least the mergana aspect is somewhat comforting |
Adele chapter 22 . 8/26/2018 Love Morgana and her impulsive to be with Merlin. Hunith and Will are fabulous. |
Adele chapter 21 . 8/26/2018 I love a good wedding. |
Adele chapter 20 . 8/26/2018 Tom Hopper is married to Laura in real life. In legend percival married blanchefleur. They had a son named Lohengrin. Richard Wagner wrote an opera about Lohengrin. |