You know what, I think I prefer the original end. ;D Still awesome though.

This story was great. Love it. 10/10 would recommend to others.

Way to toy with my sanity though. It was just a bit of a mind-fuck. I loved the bit about Superboy trying to shatter reality by punching it; sounded familiar ;)

Fabulous author. Sometimes I think some of your stories are just high on crack the whole time and it's great.

You know, I almost think this story should come with a horror tag or, like, thriller or something. That honest to god scared the shit out of me, but like some kind of masochist I made myself read the whole thing. Mostly because I probably wouldn't have been able to sleep without knowing everything gets fixed... though that was one ambiguous as fuck ending! I probably won't even get to sleep now, when I know how everything was resolved. God, I'm going to drown myself in something fluffy and sweeter than cotton candy, thank you. Rae Kid, out.

I really enjoyed this story, so much that I'm still thinking about it days later. First of all, I loved your references to the universally hated 'All-Star Batman and Robin' which is perhaps one of the cruelest versions of Batman in current comic lore. Plus everything with Black Canary and GL just added to this this alternate universe.
The blending of the two realities was so well described, watching Artemis slowly fade and M'gann slip into a coma was just wow. You have a talent with words and crafting an intriguing story even managing to incorporate a Bat universe many would rather forget. Well done!

(laughing)hahahahahhaha (sobbing)hahahahahahahha you broke my brain

oh Damn this is omg you truly are a god or goddess

oh i get the dimension are collapsing on themselves trying to right themselves and batman will become ... wow this like so damn awesome, deep, dark, amazingly intense. thank you for enlightening my mind with your eternal words

Hot damn batman
like omg your story is so its so like aaaaaaaahhhh i have like serious migrains or maybe even brain damage

aawww shit!

Brilliant. Simply brilliant. Horrifying and vivid and I just love how it all comes to Dick and focuses on him and just snaps into place, and I love the little details, the precision, like "He needs to check on the League and the world and Dick". So simple, yet saying so much...

I just finished reading this. Wow.
There is no completed tag, but I'm pretty sure it's complete, so...
A few things kind of bothered me. If the team went back in time because the world was fraying, and the world was fraying because the team went back in time, how did the cycle start? And how does Bruce locking himself up lock other Batman up too?
Such an awesome story, though. And I love how Robin's the same everywhere! Woop! Reminds me of this one bit in Infinte Crisis that you may/may not have read but you can find at this link. Just get rid of parentheses : post/33026522556/thegoddamnbatfam-batgirlrising-th is-right
I have no idea whose tumblr that is, by the way. :)
My mind is so blown by the awesomeness of this story.

This was awesome.
And it reminded me of the new JL movie
Justice League: Flashpoint Paradox.
(Which is SO KICKASS OMIGAWD.)
It had Kaldur! :D
ANYWAYZ. I loved this story. Lots. Heaps. Like, I love it equal to the amount of power the Speeforce holds.
Yayz.

I think you broke my brain. With the shadows and the italics and the non-italics and the confusion that I'm sure you put there on purpose and the...the red-headed Time... Lady... I kind of feel like I'm on drugs. And its entirely this stories fault. But GOD that was amazing! And NOBODY KNOWS? Like. Seriously. I as having problems keeping there stories straight which you ENTIRELY did on purpose and the bit at the end with Robin? And every other word being in a different word? Wow. That was brilliant. That entire thing was so mind-warpingly brilliant that I'm surprised I'm not curled up on the floor muttering about alternate dimensions.

Oh. My God. That was just... oh my God. That's was really amazing! It was all set up with questionable temporal laws intact and then the moment Artemis said "Two-bit thug," I KNEW. I KNEW that THAT had been the moment when everything went to hell. O geez. my brain just went haywire with all the posibilities!

Wow. I don't think I've ever read anything quite like this. I mean, I've read time travel and parallel dimension fic, but the way in which you framed it really emphasized the... parallel... ness. Yeah, you've pretty much left me speechless.

Honestly, I read this mostly because it had friggin' Crazy Steve in the summary, and there is not enough fic of the lolariousness that is ASBAR. So I kind of thought it would be crack!fic, but let me tell you, I was surprised but not disappointed. I loved all the little comics references and in-jokes, like Superboy(s?) trying to punch reality.

The ending was great but if I picked up on everything correctly the two timelines sort of merged into one, right? I can't help but worry about M'gann, especially with that ominous line about Batman's 'dark little smile.'

(P.S. Congrats, this is the first time I've taken the time to review a fic on since last February!)