Reviews for Eyes of a Corpse
angeliena chapter 1 . 5/27/2017
Oh nice! I had a feeling that John always had money because he leaved in a motel. Are you going update this story?
lp257 chapter 4 . 6/28/2015
I found this not too long ago and really enjoyed reading what's here so far. I'm very curious to learn the origins of the orange quilt!
delia cerrano chapter 4 . 8/13/2014
Just started following. Interesting thoughts on the homeless.
Markath chapter 4 . 8/13/2014
Wow, your insights in homeless John are very well written. But I am especially looking forward to the story of the 'orange quilt'!
blacktop chapter 4 . 8/12/2014
I'm enjoying this series a lot. I've written several fanfics which include Joan and the world of the homeless encampment that John fell into when he came back to the U.S. and I always like to read more about the help that he got in that unexplored period in his back story.
Guest chapter 3 . 6/20/2014
Excellent glimpse into John's backstory, more please !
Ritsikas chapter 3 . 3/28/2014
Wow! this sounds/looks really good ! Im a sucker for the romance ones soo I can just picture some in the future (not right away)
Even maybe in the future when John and Harold have found one another, a number may come. Like Joan-s maybe or something! His aka lifesaver :D

I really like your writing style so far. It moves smoothly and describes things like they are but not too much. If anything then maybe the main people (Joan, Sophia ect) looks.
But Im soo sorry for the stupide ideas, do continue with the story and past of our hero :)
*adds to alert list*
NiennaTru chapter 3 . 3/28/2014
I was so happy to see you'd updated this! This collection is a favorite of mine, so I was pleased to see you hadn't abandoned it. I hope to see more soon. Thanks again for writing and sharing!
lionsassy chapter 3 . 3/27/2014
Really well done, love it.
Guest chapter 3 . 3/27/2014
This is really good, I love stories of the homeless John and Joan. Good characterization and action.
Valentine51 chapter 3 . 3/27/2014
You just take your time and write as your muse presents itself . . . these vignettes are extraordinary. Excellent writing . . . a part of John that has only been explored on the surface. Thank you for being brave enough to go below the surface . . . especially love how you give such respectful care in your stories about his homeless "family." Got you on "followup speed dial."
delia cerrano chapter 3 . 3/27/2014
Chapters 1-3: I hope he meets Harold soon. He understands John and what he needs to heal and feel worthwhile again.
ladyleo65 chapter 2 . 7/12/2013
I really enjoyed the story. Liked how is Risk at the end where he tells Joan thanks for looking after him and she asks who is looking after you now. And he says someone new. Nice.
NiennaTru chapter 2 . 10/31/2012
These were great one-shots. Joan, and Sophia are well-written-I liked Sophia especially well. If you continue with these one-shots, it'd be great to see her again. I thought you captured John's despair and depression very well. Thanks for writing, and I sincerely hope you continue!
persnikitty5 chapter 2 . 7/28/2012
I hope you continue these one shots.
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