THIS IS AWESOME!

Good to see more chapters! Looking forward to more :)

Awesome... Just awesome... All I need to say.

Very interesting looking forward to more

Not many people can start a pre-lemon and then steer in the opposite direction smoothly. I liked it!

This is one of the best Candy fics I've read, honest to God. It's very mature and realistic, something you barely ever see in fanfiction, and I like how absolutely steady the style of writing is. Like, you start this in 2012 and, although your writing has improved since the first chapter, it carries the same atmosphere and the changing of styles (a thing other fanfic writers tend to do) doesn't disrupt the flow of the story. I also like that the chapters are short. Honestly, I hate short chapters because I feel they are a bit sloppy and they usually aren't written well, but the short chapters only adds to the atmosphere of the story. It's all so very mature, realistic, yet laid back. I really love this.
I'm sorry if I come off as too flattery, but it's just I'm super excited for this fic because it's really well written, compared to 99% of the fan fiction on South Park. Please continue!

Lol I never expected this to get updated. As usual its great and very detailed in everything it does.

Nice. I was hopin some good Candy would show up :D I love this. It's the first time I've read a second person narrative and it feel natural.

Please, Please update this. Not only is the concept great, the writing excellent, and the dialogue powerful, but everyone is perfectly in character. Cartman is older, more matured, but he still feels like Cartman and talks like Cartman. Don't be discouraged by a lack of reviews as in general there are not many people in general who go to southpark fanfiction.

Are you going to continue this?

Holy shit this is intense. I wish you'd update, this story had me literally clenching my stomach. The words are powerful and the second person writing makes it all the more intense.

Ok so I'm addicted haha I need more! I love the idea of them growing up.

Hm, I've never read a story in second person before. It's gonna take me some getting used to, but I like where you're going with this so far. It makes sense that Cartman is rich and successful as an adult now. And I'm glad to see another Candy fic. Good job so far and I look forward to the next chapter. :)

This is really good, im hoping this is the first chapter of many. There was one mistake which i can't ignore though... It's not 'leaves fall' its actually 'leafs fall'
But apart from that this is an amazing plot. Pls post the next chapter soon, thanks :)