Cute.

Im crying and shuddering right now... So emotional and beutiful but still utterly sad story...;(

Gaaah. WHY! WHY!? TTvTT now you've destroyed my feels for the whole evening!

I love this one so much! even though it makes me cry every damn time I read it :')

Because swearing lets the world know that you're awesome.

I can't believe I stumbled into another Azula Death story... aargh, Incidental Villaness has a really good one too. But this was really good too.

Wait, wasn't Katara right there?

I can't believe that this story has only one review, 'cause it's a freakin' shame, seriously.

I *loved* this, Azula regained here honor in an unlikely moment, and you really did a spot on job keeping her in character. Even when she knew that that was "it" she was still fighting, and held on to that part of her personality that made her great, and gave her the strength to come through for everyone. I don't want to spoil what happened in the story for everyone who hadn't read, but the home thing? Awe, just sheer awe!

And may I please say how completely and totally Tophish it was that Azula could undo something so final? Only she could. I *LOVE* the way you write Azula!

Lastly, I must commend you for having the courage to write the way that *you* want to, instead of pandering your art to the taste of others.

'Roar

I wanted to get into this, being that it stars two of my favorite characters, but I couldn't because Azula's dialogue is... really off. Why all the profanity? Of all the characters in the show, Azula has to be among the least likely to ever swear. She speaks with eloquence and is remarkably articulate for a teenager, but in your story, all of that is lost to needless cursing. You can easily tell when she's angry in the show, so I really don't understand why that couldn't be maintained in this story. Dialogue is an important part of a character's personality, and when you alter that, they cease to feel like the original article. If you want to remain faithful to Azula's personality, the swearing would need to go. I liked the premise, but just couldn't make it through the story because of this, sorry. Good luck with any future works you might attempt.