really cute... little spain and little france they are so cute... please continue... this is a very beautiful story...

Ah! I love this story! Lol, can't wait to read more!

I love FrancexSpain
So thank you for writing this story ;)
I can't wait for the next chapter (but I have to)
P.s. I love your story

Little Spain is so cuuuute! "A cheer up charm! I made it up just now!" D'awwwwww

Nice story :D At first i was a bit confused, because I didn't know that they were in the past. (At first I thought of Spain and France were in the future of the present, not their past. Until I saw you mention Rome and Gaul... I know, confusing :P) Then i saw how you were putting them in the future, by bringing their past selves into the present... then it all made sense to me -_- Anyways, I have enjoyed this story so far and can't for you to update :D

Im really enjoying the story, its fun and I think it's a great plot. Im sad to tell you that you made a mistake on the portuguese in "Answer her você pirralha". I imagine you wanted something like 'you brat' But the 'você' is being used incorectly and 'pirralha' is feminine. The proper way to say that would have been 'seu pirralho' or simply use 'pirralho'.

ITS SO CUTE!

I love this so far! I can't wait for an update!

Bye

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AHAHAHAHA! (ROFL) /(/7/)\

This...is...GENIUS! BlackRaven64-san, I love this! The dialogue, the plot, the descriptions, the interactions...GAAAH! This is just epic awesome!

Do continue this story, please! (7) I would like to definitely see the outcome of little Spain and France! I'll be anticipating!

this is the only thing I can say or write now. I want more!

Wow, the garden-scene was beautiful oO
and the boys friendship was luvley. you are a very talented writer, keep going!

Plz update more :)

Lol, this could be real. I can totally see their bickering and England fucking shit up.