wow

The story was great but the ending was definitely a bit rushed. Like who was "Lee" really? Was he trying to force her actual death when he made her into a NPC? What about Kenshin? Sunshine? The kiwi fruit was definitely an interesting quirk. I wished it would have had a more interesting role. Can't wait for your sequel and i hope that Arctic Fox makes an appearance.

SO. MANY. GRAMMAR. AND. SPELLING. *gasps last word* ERRORS

Will do.

I really liked your story! It's kind of different from the others.
But the last 2 chapters felt like there were rushed. I think it would have been better if Prince remained with Lee longer & would have fought against Odd Squod longer. I would have liked it if Prince would have lost his memory for longer & they needed more time to get him/her back into her body!
But anyway I liked your story pretty much. Thx for uploading .

The story was great! loved the plot, but I m disappointed that u ended it so abruptly... I was hoping that the story would develop more...

i realy liked your story and would enjoy a slightly expanded ending

Hey Kat,
your Story ist really great!
When Xiao Lan changed her gender was probably the most awesome Moment,
Guis face must have been priceless!
Please continue the story - perhaps with longer chapters? *please :o *

*cheering*
Lym

wow!
you might want to say who's POV it is at the start.
dont forget disclaimer!

Good idea changing the gender! :O I want to kill that stupid Lee guy!

Please...
Update soon and make it be long chapters.
Well... †hñkγ({})ü for new chapters ;)

If they have some kind of awkward moment when they wake up, I will seriously love you! XD Holding hands never ends well!

Hahaha! Gui's hair that was pretty funny I like this story!

Intriguing story, keep it up.

Oooh! I can't wait to continue reading this! It... Is just s original. I can't wait for more (: