This is so GOOD! I'm so glad I found this! The first thing I noticed is that while they are in character, you didn't overdo it at ALL! And the states aren't balls of obnoxious energy as well!
You added little things like how Florida would technically be a brother than a son and that he speaks SPANISH! Alaska isn't a mini Russia! Georgia isn't an overbearing redneck! AAAAH!

I don't find many good state oc fics, but I think this would definitely be one! I hope you continue this, even though it's been 3 years since last time. You have so much potential, and even if you don't continue this, I feel that you'll do so well in the future. Kudos!

I would say that North Dakota has to keep his dad bust for the hole month. XD

yay I like this! and I would vote for new Mexico (he really is my favorite) but I'm on my iPod, and I can't vote from it... *sigh*

but yeah, great story, and I hope you keep writing it!

XD. I like this. Do you think you'll continue/update this?

I'm going to guess that he has the job of distracting America from all of this, but I can't be sure.

Loved it!

update!

I can't wait to see, poor NC. I'm rooting for my state!

update

update soon please

You are the funniest, most AWESOME hilarious writer EVER! This is genius! It's so beautiful!

Are you going to finish this, because you, like totes should. *channeling inner Poland*

AMAZING! Trio of the US of A is like my most favorite story and a follow up is the stuff of dreams - spearkle eyes -

Love the personality of the countries and England's kidnapping was gold :D

Just a hint, trying to keep tabs on who's talking is a little difficult -'

CANT WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER! HURRY!

I can't wait to read more! -

this is very good so far, i would love to see NY or NH give vermont a creepy become one with new york/hampshire speech later on when they are introduced.

Alaska and Hawaii are just too adorable!
Loved the chapter!