This is one of those rare, novel-quality fics that really catch my attention. This is very good, and I look forward to reading more. I like the political stuff, the assassinations, it's very cool!

Excellent story there.. didn't think there was anything apart form the usual romances floating around.

Hopefully you'll be getting to the meat of the story soon.. the character background is interesting and all, but it's been dragging on for quite a bit.

Heh.. I almost expected some MiB camos too. p

Keep it up.. I'm adding this to my favourites.

What are you doing reading this?

GET BACK TO WORK!

"Everything Must Go" is still developing wonderfully, but try not to rush its mechanics or bloat its characters.

The other 'potential' fic strikes me as something that might stand better on its own...after you concentrate on E.M.G and Cthulu Muyo.

(And if you want more reviews I suggest you suck them in directly, not that I wont gladly plug your work when my big story is ready to brave the gauntlet.)

Your writing is very good, however this isnt really what I expected (or wanted). Without even an apperance of the regular "Tenchi gang" in the first 3 chapters this feels almost more like an "original" story rather than fanfiction.

Or perhaps more like a "sidestory" :

AUTHORS NOTES : After the request of my readers I have decided to write a sidestory that takes place before the beginning of EMG. This sidestory presents the background info on The Assasin that attacked Tenchi in chapter1 of my story as well as the scene when he got his assaignment.

Magnificent. I always like the touch of the professional in fanfiction.

I presume that you, like Hospitaller, work for the Canadian government.

This chapter is right on par with the first one. What more can I say than it was a pleasant read, and I am more than happy I stumbled across this little gem. Write on, for your story has a soul that I would hate to see be incomplete with an unfinished story.

All i can say is that it is a shame that I haven't bothered to read any of your fanfiction. This story is intriguing captivating, and so far accomplishing all that with characters that either appeared in one episode of the OVA or ACC. I'm not hear to make you into a god with pointless extreme praise because it truly wouldn't be fanfiction if there weren't room for improvement. However I do say that you have done a phenomenal job, and your works with a few others continue to stand out of the countless peices of dribble appearing in the fanfiction community. I applaud the job you've done.

I don't want to insult you with excessive praise; you deserve more than that sort of collective self indulgence. You also deserve more than an honest exchange of constructive criticisms, but for now that's all I can offer and ask.

Please accept, and continue to be exceptional.

I believe this is a reposting, so I guess I'll just have to throw in my blunt two cents again that you show promise beyond the standards of fanfiction. Be inspired and, more importantly, be diligent.

i like this story, i can't wait until the next chapter. :)

Quite a different plot from other fanfictions, though slightly confusing, not knowing if that was your purpose. Please continue!

Is Azusa really stupid enough to think that any assassin he could find would be capable of killing the single most powerful being, outside of Tsunami herself, in the universe? I mean, Tenchi took out Kagato EFFORTLESSLY. The same Kagato who the entire might of the Juraian Empire was unable to touch for longer than Azusa has been alive. Not to mention the man who Azusa got personally trounced by a few thousand years ago.

Also, about the Prime Minister's delusion that he could kill Misaki, remember that she isn't just some childish woman who's married to the king. She's also the head of the Royal Guards, and one of the strongest Juraians alive (only her mother Seto exceeds her in sheer physical strength).