Please finish up the story because I want to know if everyone is in the reunion ( justice league included)

Hello, I couldn't help but notice a error in this lovely chapter. When writing a character's death, it is usually has more detail and depth to it. A better way to write Tula's and Kaldur's death would be to write from his and hers point of view than jumping to someone else's,

Tula narrowed her eyes at Black Manta. The man swinged his sword in her direction with a crazed laugh, forcing her to move backwards, lest she wanted to be cut. Her past mistake weighed heavily in Black Manta's favor, a deadly wound in her side.

Sounds of battle and pain surrounded Tula from all sides, drowning out her heavy breathing.

Black Manta tutted.

"You poor dear, fighting for such a pitiful king. Such a shame, talent like yours could have been sharpened into something useful."

He sighed dramatically.

"I have no time for this. Goodbye my dear."

The gun was too fast for Tula.

(Garth)

Garth felt a glimmer of hope. The battle was slowly but surely turning for the better. They had managed to down many of Black Manta's men with few casualties on their side. He laughed. How easy it was!

I'm not going to continue it from there. But adding more description adds to the suspense! Keep writing, you're really good!

I know I should be laughing but... Just look

BLACK MANTA: yes Kaldur, I am your father.

DARK VADER: I am your father

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Omg Artemis se puso loca por un momento xD! Estoy tan orgullosa de jinx! Ella pudo haberle ganado a Artemis y sin embargo solo se defendió, a cambiado tanto TuT estoy orgullosa de que sea buena TuT aunque comprendo a artemis supongo, fue un momento de celos y condición :')

Xdddd esa pelea va a estar mundial. Xddd seguro haces que Artemis gane TTTuTTT

Lo ultimo en la nota de autor es justo lo que quería esuchar xD

Omgomg!omg! XDDDdDD
Dime que amas el Flinx :c please. Yo también lo veo como universos diferentes! Flinx3
XD no podría ver YJ o sería difícil xD verlo a él con artemis. Mientras haya Flinx podré soportar lo que sea **
Escribes genial 3
XD estas historias son súper graciosas

Thought to was amazing! I loved it! Well done!

So this is the second time I've read your story in probably the past two weeks, it's so good. Since the first time, I've looked at your other fanfictions, and it's just so sad reading this again and realizing what Rob's dream was about. I love how you intertwine them, and wrote oneshots for some of the stories that they tell, it's amazing

I think that the story was awesome but u should make an other version where they remember and things go differently

Z-zatanna d-died? HOW DEAR YOU KILL MY FVORET CHARACTER?! YOU MOTHERF#%*ER!

Beast boys eyes wear already green before he got the blood transfusion

knives. in. my. heart.
T.T

...such an amazing read though.
thanks so much for writing this and sharing it here!