hope you update soon
i love it D

I found internet in a deserted place, I found internet in a deserted place, I found internet in a DESERTED PLACE! So yeah,I missed our random PM's, I like this chapter, OC's be interesting, if you have issues with ideas I could stick a few hundred in you head :P feel free to consult with me via PM since I'll be home tomorrow :D (Or is it today? Stupid using-the-internet-in-the-middle-of-the-night . Tenses be confusing D:)

I hate vacation D: but not as much as I hate school... ._.

i can't wait for the next chapter its getting so good XD

oh my god i think i just watched that sterek video it was so awesome and i love this story. violet reminds my of one of my characters from my fanfics and its just so awesome

Major lolz for Dominic! :D Can't wait for more on him :D And the puppy pile was so cute! And that line from Violet "And beware of Dominic people! He's a sex addict! He'll hit on anything that has two legs and a nice ass. Especially you guys, he's a sucker for hotties with abs" xD xD

Sorry, just way to many inconsistencies to keep reading. If she has such discipline and purpose that she can wait alone for five years, training everyday for the return of her mother, she wouldn't risk being discovered by a pack of werewolves by recklessly flashing cat eyes at a pack member, or driving a hundred thousand dollar car to high school. That car would have the attention of the entire student body and half the teachers as well, especially in a small town. Just like her having green hair, it practically screams look at me, when her main drive as a personality at this point is to stay below the radar, and wait for her mother.

Everybody is really out of character in this chapter... Pretty sure your "character" Violet is just another Mary-Sue, especially with how you have Stiles go out of his way to compliment her, but I'll give the story a shot and hope you actually have a plot here somewhere.

Awesome!

Awesome! I love Stiles too! :D

Just adding that I love your story, please don't kill me for the PM I sent, and I was also thinking you might want to change the rating from K to T since Violet does have a bit of a potty mouth (that makes her all the more realistic though!)

I love seeing your writing and I'm happy to help!

Leafy

That was great! :D :D That line "No way in hell was she becoming Gerard Argent's fucking sex toy" made me laugh :D :D And Derek coming to her rescue was awesome! :D

Ooh! Great chapter! :)

Dude! That was frigging awesome! I LOVE how you brought the hunters in at the end! :D :D :D Can't wait to read the next chapter! It's gonna be EPIC! :D

*Eye twitch* Pack mommy and daddy? THAT IS SO EFFIN CUTE! The tiger XD I loves me the tiger XD Worrying about hunters finding her makes me sad though, I'd die if they found her and I wouldn't believe it if they didn't D: I just love emotionally screwwing with myself :/

Awesome! That line "Jesus christ for the mother of Buddha!" cracked me up! Loved it! :D