You just wanted to make people fel sorry for your OC... that and "Raeve Seikakunakopi"...? Nice attempt at making a Japanese name.

I am so sorry you discontinued this story, but I really enjoyed what I read, and I thought I would let you know.

Oh, ho, ho. Still interesting as ever. If I could find one thing that I had to criticize, it would be the transitions inside compound sentences. I only noticed it once in here, and it's not a big deal, but if it happens too often, then your writing becomes forced and unnatural.
I'm still loving it, though!
Kate

Ah! I really, really liked it! I seriously can't find any criticism to put! Really great job, and keep up the good work! I can't wait to see the next chapter!
Kate