For the record, your novella was very very very well-written. I stumbled upon it and read it before reading this. But, now, I want some more feisty Bella (there really isn’t enough) and possessive Paul! Please update ASAP. Thank you!

Your writing is so good. I could feel everything that Bella was feeling. All the rage, confusion, and injustice of it all. I know I would probably do the same thing. And even though I’m shit at holding grudges, faced with the same oppression every day, I’m sure I could muster up one hell of a storm. Can’t wait to see what Bella does next. Even though, try as I might, I can’t hate Paul always. Mostly, I just feel sorry for him. But I do hate the imprinted pairs. Especially Jessica and Jacob. Only because instead of reasoning with her and trying to have a conversation with her or just telling her what the hell was going on during all those weeks of radio silence from Jessica and Jacob, they tried to brainwash her or just automatically assumed that she would accept it without any reservations like the rest of the girls. Or that Jessica, her once best friend, didn’t even try and have a discussion with Bella about it.

I'd tell Paul that I would be going to uni and holidays or he would never be in my life! Only arseholes trap women and that's what he is trying to do

plz update

Wow this has been such an interesting and intense story! And it was just getting even better! Please come back and continue!

Please finish? Ty!

Things were going great till their mouths got in the way... goodness!

I had to laugh when she called him a butthead lol

well I was hoping she would finally realize that Paul was enough... but I guess she's gonna have to remove her head from her butt lol... I hope things smooth over soon...

Okay, I am totally loving how you write Paul. Oh Bella how niave she is... ugh. And the way they make each other feel is just so freaking interesting. Yes, I love it.

Will they be afacial now or is Bella going to keep fighting Paul? Please update soon!

Please, Please please finish! I absolutely love this book! And if Seth needs an imprint my oc serpentina could TOTALLY be it, she's 17 years old and pretty fiesty when she wants to be, she has flaming red hair down to her backside with black tips, and bright green eyes. She's a wolf as well, a jet black wolf with blood red ears and bushy tailed. And has beautiful ice Blue eyes.

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i know u say its now finished but i loved it ;)

Your take on the wolves was spectacular and I hope you find your way back to this story. Thank you soo much for sharing!

Please please please please come back