This is a cute fic

Cute! I likey! thanks for uploading! _

check the grammar over again when you have time, also there are areas where you are lacking in sentence fluency. If you gave those areas some more attention, the story would have a better fluency that would engage the reader more.

very cute and funny story! nice job! D

Ahhh, this is good! Very well written for a first fanfic. Don't worry, I get that funny feeling when I write something out of the blue all the time XD I mean, just look at Untitled. Stuffed animals... what was I thinking...