awesome story!

lol nigga didnt trick me i knew he would be alive

Amazing story, especially for the beginning of this chapter. Although, there are some weird metaphors in this, but there's nothing wrong with that—it's your writing style.

By the way, do you think you'll be making any stories about Zootopia? PM me your answer, please.

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Man, this is too l can sy is that this is AMAZING.

First off I haven't had much time to read it but it took me three God damn days to finish but a true and I mean true masterpiece bye far the best fanfiction no not just Rio fanfiction every single fanfiction I've read this is the best you have the best hooks. In the story world this is the ultimate. Great book awesome job!:)

I need to read more rio story's

I really appreciate the way you end this "little" misunderstand, it is very brilliant.
But I personally prefer Blu to scratch his throat before Jewel's arrival. It would make the story more dramatic and breathless, and with Tulio's treatment, Blu would recover soon.
After all, this chapter is awesome, and I love the way you tell the story.

Yeah, it's exactly what i did not expect.
This particular chapter is so ridiculous, in my opinion. The problem was solved too fast and i expected more Blu's, Jewel's and especially Ronaldo's introvative self-talkings or thoughts.

i hope there is a happy ending

Wow. I just finished the next to you stories. I have to say that was amazing. NTY started good but you finished it off brilliantly. I have been reading nonstop the past two days. When I thought Blu cheated on Jewel, I was hooked. You did a great job, shame it ended, but I will certainly read your other stories now, you are a great author. Good luck!

I love this and all of your other Rio stories. I never watched the movie ti'll it came on this past weekend. Great movie and love some of these fanfictions here. Especially this and some of your others. Great job!

Great chapters! Sofar I love this story, you are doing a good job, I will be sure to keep reading!

I LOVED this Story! Thankyou for writing such a Magnificent story! I thank you from the bottom of my heart..And..Yeah..Bye now..and..Thanks..again

ok Ronaldo is still a character Im not comfortable with. one rong move from him and my INFINITY'S 4 MAC (magnetic accelerator cannons) are gonna leave a massive hole where he once stood. got it Ronaldo my one and only warning to you. ow and btw the INFINITY is 5.3km long just to let him know. nice story btw l love it INFINITY OUT