Yay you updated! Woohoo woohoo WOOHOOO!
...[Okay, inner fangirl, calm yoh tits. We still have a half-decent review to write over here]...
Glad to see you back on the fanfiction hyperspace. You have been missed.

It was so exciting seeing Kansas again! I know this was at the end, but I had to mention him first. It's a good thing he showed up when he did. And I think Jaime enjoyed the rescue too, if yah know what I mean *wink wink*. I mean who wouldn't want to get CPR from my ultra hot, super smexy muscle monkey *swoons*... [ugh, inner fangirl, I told you. Control your hormones.]

Suffice it to say, I think we all knew Jaime's plan was going to end horribly badly. When he actually admitted to his stupidity, in my head I was like "preach it." But at least he lived. Wonder if Kansas is going to help him get his hands on his submerged pokeball. And I'm so curious. Was that mystery water Pokemon a Gyarados?

Keep writing! And nice update.

00Sakura00

Yayyyy! You updated! I love you for this! xD Once again, an amazing chapter! KKeep updating please! I love this!

This is the best story ever

and you seem pretty fucking cute too

You know, the moment Vulpix touched the stone gave me chills when I read it. Literally. It was just the way you described it, with their eyes connecting. It was just so powerful. Wow. I knew he was going to evolve the moment the stone flew out Jaime's pocket, tbh, but I was surprised by the fact that I truly enjoyed the scene of its evolution. Great chapter.

00Sakura00

Lol so happy Sol got what he deserved in that battle. I liked the strategy in it. And I wonder what Anastasia-bitch is up to this time. I think she's my favorite character so far b/c she keeps me guessing. But Kansas is pretty up there too, mostly b/c he's cool and I imagine him to be totally hot ;)

00Sakura00

I suspected it was going to be his Pokemon to save him! And I love that Clefable, especially the line about her thinking she was like a Chansey haha. Plus there was a lot of savviness in the chapter on your part - with the wound cleaning and the cave. I really liked it.

00Sakura00

Oh I really enjoyed this scene! The battle was tragically brilliant. What rotten luck Jaime has. He can't seem to catch a break, but at least it gives us some entertainment!

00Sakura00

Nooooo! Vulpix! Ugh damn that Swellow. And poor Jaime. I wonder what he's going to do next.

00Sakura00

I don’t get it… if those two girls on disguise are now ‘part of the top 8’ and fighting in the arena...does that mean two of the actual contesters died or something?
Really nice suspense btw! Looking forward to a major plot twist
But for advice, hurry up and make Jamie find more pokemon because it’s dragging on too much. Poor guy

So it's clear this island is a bucket full of crazy danger. At least Jaime is making friends? I wonder if Vulpix ever will actually become a Ninetails. They're so pretty. Like gorgeous pretty. I mean, if I had to live out my life as a Pokemon, I'd pick Ninetails. Because I'd be hot (attraction-wise and temperature-wise). Though I guess it'd be cool to be a dragon Pokemon too. Because they can fly. But it couldn't be one of those ugly dragons like Salamence...maybe Dragonite. Or even Latias. Or actually...Entei would be my choice. Entei is a beast. AND he runs fast. I know that because I saw it in that one Pokemon movie.

So I can't figure whether Bea is awesome or a total witch. I mean come on, you couldn't tell Jaime about his pokeball and save him the trouble of almost dying? Jeesh...girl is hardcore. At least you still have Vulpix, Jaime...

Awesome chapter. It sounds like some assissins were just hired:)

I love this chapter. It has so much compassion.

Fucking AWESOME

Is the pink blob a clefairy?:) Can't wait for more!