First off, no hate or anything but this a complete copy of another fiction because I've read it. But that's not the worst part. O GOD PLEASE NO, its the DAMN GRAMMAR. Do you even go to school, because if you do, i bet it started in 2000 BC and ended in 1999 BC, because the spelling is horrendous. HOWEVER, I still like this fan fiction and if you are still writing or rebooting, do a better job of this. Gr8 b8 m8 i r8 8/8

This story stinks. Psychic talking pokemon... :(

Amazing, but there's just one thing. Finish it! Please finish it the story is so awesome and intriguing. Finish!

awweeee i wanna read moreeeeeeeeee, so good!

To think this was updated 3 years ago it's AMAZING if u see this comment plz continue

Please continue this story

TalonFlame would've won the race if he were here '-'

Come on SERIOUSLY you are gonna leave this story midway . Your story line is amazing. I hope u read this message and continue this story ...

UPDATE! THIS GIVES ME IDEAS TO MAYBE USE IN THE SINNOH REMAKES.

HEY ARE U GOING TO FINSH THIS STORY. ITS BEEN 2 YRS SINCE U UPDATED

gabriel is an ass if it was six on six i bet all his pokemon know destiny bond

I love it but it needs to be finished plz

update

Please continue the fanfic, at least to the part in that ash reveal his indetity to the people and the traitors, and as may will react to discover that red is ash; she still think that him is a jerk despite to betray him in first place or she have enough moral to accept that she and the traitors deserve his hatred by forsake him?

i think that may be upset and angry with ash when he decide reveal his identy, because she think that he became a jerk instead of believe that she and the traitor group deserve his rage for the betray, get worsen the chance to get his forgiveness and ash finally declare them, especially to may his enemies.